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retronauta

March 24, 2021

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Wrong product

Yesterday i bought a box of neutral soap. i'm allergic and if my nose receives any perfume odor the show it's begin. Eyes, nose and throat are irritated.
When i approached to the box and felt the perfume i had to run away. Obviously the messenger made a mistake that it could cost me a lot of tissues and anti allergy pills.

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The Wrong pProduct

In English, the first letter of all nouns, verbs, adjetives, adverbs, etc., needs to be capitalized in the title.

Yesterday i, I bought a box of neutralunscented soap.

iI'm allergic to the scented kind and if my nose receives any perfume or odor, the show it's begins.

EMy eyes, nose and throat arbecome irritated.

WSo when iI approached to the box and feltsmelled the perfume i, I had to run away.

Obviously, the messenger made a mistake that it could cost me a lot of tissues and anti -allergy pills.

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Great Job! Just a few corrections!

Yesterday iI bought a box of neutralunscented soap.

i'mI have allergices and if my nose receives any perfume odoras soon as my nose gets the slightest hint of perfume; that's when the show it's begins.

EMy eyes, nose and throat arll become irritated.

When iI approached to the box and feltsmelled the perfume iI had to run away.

Obviously the messenger made a mistake that it could cost me a lot of tissues and anti allergy pills.

I haven't heard 'allergy pills' in conversation very often. Most of the time I hear 'allergy medication' or something more specific such as an antihistamine.

Wrong product


The Wrong pProduct

In English, the first letter of all nouns, verbs, adjetives, adverbs, etc., needs to be capitalized in the title.

Yesterday i bought a box of neutral soap.


Yesterday iI bought a box of neutralunscented soap.

Yesterday i, I bought a box of neutralunscented soap.

i'm allergic and if my nose receives any perfume odor the show it's begin.


i'mI have allergices and if my nose receives any perfume odoras soon as my nose gets the slightest hint of perfume; that's when the show it's begins.

iI'm allergic to the scented kind and if my nose receives any perfume or odor, the show it's begins.

Eyes, nose and throat are irritated.


EMy eyes, nose and throat arll become irritated.

EMy eyes, nose and throat arbecome irritated.

When i approached to the box and felt the perfume i had to run away.


When iI approached to the box and feltsmelled the perfume iI had to run away.

WSo when iI approached to the box and feltsmelled the perfume i, I had to run away.

Obviously the messenger made a mistake that it could cost me a lot of tissues and anti allergy pills.


Obviously the messenger made a mistake that it could cost me a lot of tissues and anti allergy pills.

I haven't heard 'allergy pills' in conversation very often. Most of the time I hear 'allergy medication' or something more specific such as an antihistamine.

Obviously, the messenger made a mistake that it could cost me a lot of tissues and anti -allergy pills.

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