May 25, 2021
Writing: Raising fuel prices to protect the environment...
Because of economic inequality, raising the cost of fuels will exacerbate inequality. Poor people, such as long-distance freight drivers, may spend more on transportation, and raising fuel prices would reduce their income and increase inequality; while raising prices would have little effect on the rich.
Emission-reduction is not the only way to raise prices, but can also be improved from the side of oil suppliers and transportation manufacturers.
There are other ways to protect the environment, such as reducing the use of plastic bags and increasing recycling of waste products.
Writing: Raising fuel prices to protect the environment...
Because of economic inequality, raising the cost of fuels will exacerbate inequality.
Poor people, such as long-distance freight drivers, may spend more on transportation, and raising fuel prices would reduce their income and increase inequality; while raising prices would have little effect on the rich.
You used the same phrase twice "increase inequality"
Emission-reduction is not the only way to raise prices, but can also be improved from the side of oil suppliers and transportation manufacturers.
There are other ways to protect the environment, such as reducing the use of plastic bags and increasing recycling of waste products.
Feedback
Your English is very good :) good job, you got this!
May 26, 2021
Thanks :)
|
Writing: Raising fuel prices to protect the environment... This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Because of economic inequality, raising the cost of fuels will exacerbate inequality. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Poor people, such as long-distance freight drivers, may spend more on transportation, and raising fuel prices would reduce their income and increase inequality; while raising prices would have little effect on the rich. Poor people, such as long-distance freight drivers, may spend more on transportation, and raising fuel prices would reduce their income and increase inequality; while raising prices would have little effect on the rich. You used the same phrase twice "increase inequality" |
|
Emission-reduction is not the only way to raise prices, but can also be improved from the side of oil suppliers and transportation manufacturers. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
There are other ways to protect the environment, such as reducing the use of plastic bags and increasing recycling of waste products. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.
Go Premium