May 19, 2021
Writing: Money Can't Bring Happiness
1. Economic wealth is necessary for material-based needs, but it does not mean that more material things bring more happiness.
2. Making more money as the only goal in life may lead to inflated desires that lead to unhappiness instead.
3. People who surround the wealthy may neglect of the poor, the needy.
1. Economic wealth is necessary for material-based needs, but it does not mean that more material things bring more happiness.
2. Making more money as the only goal in life may lead to inflated desires that lead to unhappiness instead.
3. People who surround the wealthy may neglect of the poor, the and needy.
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June 4, 2021
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June 4, 2021
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Writing: Money Can't Bring Happiness |
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Money doesn't bring happiness |
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Argument: Money Can't Bring Happiness |
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1. Economic wealth is necessary for material-based needs, but it does not mean that more material things bring more happiness. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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2. Making more money as the only goal in life may lead to inflated desires that lead to unhappiness instead. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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3. People who surround the wealthy may neglect of the poor, the needy. 3. People who surround the wealthy may neglect |
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