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May 17, 2021

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Writing: Major in Humanities

In China, once the college entrance exam is completed, students have to fill in the college and major based on their score. It is not easy to change majors after entering university. In high school, we would divide the subjects for the college entrance exam into humanities (politics, history, geography) and science (physics, chemistry, biology); we follow this division in college. Although with the integration of subjects, this division is very uncritical.

1. Society needs human resources in humanities. Rapidly developing society with industrial technology is necessary; however, it is now an information-driven society and the service industry has emerged, and the study of humanities needs more talents in order to provide better services.

2. The humanities are important for the study of human relations. The emphasis on theory in the study of science majors on campus is detached from industry, and it is most people who cannot get good jobs. With the development of artificial intelligence technology, more and more technology can be done by machines, but the emotional connection between humans can not be replaced by machinery.

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It is not easy to change majors after entering university.

In high school, we would divide the subjects for the college entrance exam into humanities (politics, history, geography) and science (physics, chemistry, biology); we follow this division in college.

Although with the integration of subjects, this division is not very uncritical.

Rapidly developing society with industrial technology is necessary; however, it is now an information-driven society and the service industry has emerged, and the study of humanities needs more talents in order to provide better services.

The emphasis on theory in the study of science majors on campus is detached from industry, and it is most people who cannot get good jobs.

With the development of artificial intelligence technology, more and more technology can be done by machines, but the emotional connection between humans can not be replaced by machinery.

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heyyawn

May 19, 2021

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Thanks :)

Writing: Major in Humanities


In China, once the college entrance exam is completed, students have to fill in the college and major based on their score.


It is not easy to change majors after entering university.


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In high school, we would divide the subjects for the college entrance exam into humanities (politics, history, geography) and science (physics, chemistry, biology); we follow this division in college.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Although with the integration of subjects, this division is very uncritical.


Although with the integration of subjects, this division is not very uncritical.

1. Society needs human resources in humanities.


Rapidly developing society with industrial technology is necessary; however, it is now an information-driven society and the service industry has emerged, and the study of humanities needs more talents in order to provide better services.


Rapidly developing society with industrial technology is necessary; however, it is now an information-driven society and the service industry has emerged, and the study of humanities needs more talents in order to provide better services.

2. The humanities are important for the study of human relations.


The emphasis on theory in the study of science majors on campus is detached from industry, and it is most people who cannot get good jobs.


The emphasis on theory in the study of science majors on campus is detached from industry, and it is most people who cannot get good jobs.

With the development of artificial intelligence technology, more and more technology can be done by machines, but the emotional connection between humans can not be replaced by machinery.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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