May 21, 2021
Writing: Factors of Sports Victory
Some people feel that the The victory in sports lies in the physical superiority of the individual; however, others feel that mental attitude is a more important factor to win games. In my opinion, the psychological condition plays a more important role in the case of individuals with a high level of athleticism.
1. Getting a win starts with having a desire to win and having confidence in yourself.
2. Dark horses and comeback winners are often those who possess a good mental condition.
3. In sports competitions and training, there are many obstacles to be encountered. Often it is not a physical obstacle, but a mental one.
Writing: Factors of Sports Victory
Some people feel that the The victory in sports lies in thean individual's physical superiorability ofhas the individualgreatest influence on their success in sports; however, others feel that mental attitude is a more important factor toin winning games.
This sounds more natural to me - let me know if you have any questions.
In my opinion, the psychological conditiony plays a more important role in the case offor individuals with a high level of athleticism.
Or "highly athletic individuals." Sometimes shorter is better :)
"The psychological condition" would be like a particular state of mind - I think you mean people's psychology in general.
1. Getting a win starts with having a desire to win and having confidence in yourself.
2. Dark horses and comeback winners are often those who possess a good mental condition.
More concise: Dark horses and comeback winners tend to possess a good mental condition.
3. In sports competitions and training, there are many obstacles to be encountered.
Better to avoid the passive voice: People encounter many obstacles in sports competitions and training.
Often it isthese are not a physical obstacles, but a mental ones.
Plural because you mentioned multiple obstacles in the previous sentence.
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June 3, 2021
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Some people feel that the The victory in sports lies in the physical superiority of the individual; however, others feel that mental attitude is a more important factor to win games. Some people feel that This sounds more natural to me - let me know if you have any questions. |
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In my opinion, the psychological condition plays a more important role in the case of individuals with a high level of athleticism. In my opinion, Or "highly athletic individuals." Sometimes shorter is better :) "The psychological condition" would be like a particular state of mind - I think you mean people's psychology in general. |
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1. Getting a win starts with having a desire to win and having confidence in yourself. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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2. Dark horses and comeback winners are often those who possess a good mental condition. 2. Dark horses and comeback winners are often those who possess a good mental condition. More concise: Dark horses and comeback winners tend to possess a good mental condition. |
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3. In sports competitions and training, there are many obstacles to be encountered. 3. In sports competitions and training, there are many obstacles to be encountered. Better to avoid the passive voice: People encounter many obstacles in sports competitions and training. |
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Often it is not a physical obstacle, but a mental one. Often Plural because you mentioned multiple obstacles in the previous sentence. |
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