Nov. 27, 2024
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Dear Tom,
I'm so glad that you’re interested in Chinese movie, so I'm writing for the purpose of recommending a excenllent movie for you.
You know that I'm fond of movies and I go to cinema every month, so I'd like share the War Wolf II with you. This movie is characterized by its story, action and special effects, which tells a story that Leng, a retired army, protected and saved the Chinese who lived in Africa when the war broken out. In addition, it is our powerful country that enables us back home safely from everywhere in the world. To conclude, it can bring you movement, arouse your love to our motherland, and help you know how great our country is
I'm looking forward to your favorable reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours, Li Ming
Part A
51, Directions;
Write a letter to a friend of yours to
1) recommend one of your favorte movies and
2) give reasons for your recommendation,
You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2,
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter, Uss "Li Ming" instead,
Do not write the address, (10 points)
wLetter Writing
Letter writing since it's in the form of a letter.
Dear Tom,
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I'm so glad that you’'re interested in Chinese movie, so I'm writing for the purpose of recommending an excenllent movie for you.
An for words that begin with a vowel letter (a, e, i, o, u). Excellent starts with letter "E"
You know that I'm fond of movies and I go to the cinema every month, so I'd like sharerecommend the War Wolf II with you.
This movie is characterized by its story, action and special effects, which tells a story that Leng, a retired army, protected and saved the Chinese who lived in Africa when the war broken out.
In addition, it is our powerful country that enables us backto return home safely from everywhereany country in the world.
To conclude, it can bring you movement, arouse your love to our motherland, and help you know how great our country is
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I'm looking forward to your favorable reply at your earliest convenience.
Bring you movement, as how?
Yours, sincerely,¶
Li Ming
From what I know, Yours sincerely is used for informal letter writing. I haven't heard of only Yours being used.
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Dear Tom,
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I'm so glad that you’re interested in a Chinese movie, so I'm writing to you for the purpose of recommending ayou an excenllent movie for youChinese movie.
You know that I'm fond of movies andso much so that I go to the cinema every month. Today, so I'd like share the War Wolf II with you.
This movie is characterizdefined by its story, action and special effects, which. It tells a story thaabout Leng, a retired army, officer, who protected and saved the Chinese people who lived in Africa when the war broken out.
I think you mean retired army officer but I'm not 100% sure
With your first sentence here, it would be good to describe what aspects of the story, action, and special effects really make this flick stand out.
What war is this movie exactly about? What country in Africa?
In additionfact, it is our powerful country that enables us backto return home safely from everanywhere in the world.
"In addition" is grammatically correct but something like "In fact" works better.
To conclude, it can bring you movemengive you thrills watching it, arouse your love tofor our motherland, and help you knowunderstand how great our country is
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I'm looking forward to your favorable reply at your earliest convenience.
I didn't understand what "it can bring you movement" meant.
Yours, Li Ming
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Overall, this piece demonstrates a great deal of your knowledge in the English language. Keep it up and consider writing in more details!
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In addition, it is our powerful country that enables us back home safely from everywhere in the world. In "In addition" is grammatically correct but something like "In fact" works better. In addition, it is our powerful country that enables us |
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Letter writing since it's in the form of a letter. |
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Dear Tom, I'm so glad that you’re interested in Chinese movie, so I'm writing for the purpose of recommending a excenllent movie for you. Dear Tom, Dear Tom, An for words that begin with a vowel letter (a, e, i, o, u). Excellent starts with letter "E" |
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You know that I'm fond of movies and I go to cinema every month, so I'd like share the War Wolf II with you. You know that I'm fond of movies You know that I'm fond of movies and I go to the cinema every month, so I'd like |
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This movie is characterized by its story, action and special effects, which tells a story that Leng, a retired army, protected and saved the Chinese who lived in Africa when the war broken out. This movie is I think you mean retired army officer but I'm not 100% sure With your first sentence here, it would be good to describe what aspects of the story, action, and special effects really make this flick stand out. What war is this movie exactly about? What country in Africa? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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To conclude, it can bring you movement, arouse your love to our motherland, and help you know how great our country is I'm looking forward to your favorable reply at your earliest convenience. To conclude, it can I didn't understand what "it can bring you movement" meant. To conclude, it can bring you movement, arouse your love to our motherland, and help you know how great our country is Bring you movement, as how? |
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Yours, Li Ming This sentence has been marked as perfect! Yours From what I know, Yours sincerely is used for informal letter writing. I haven't heard of only Yours being used. |
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