Feb. 20, 2025
Writing
Hi, Marcela.
I really want to meet you next week, because I miss you very much.
My town is quiet and small, but It's very beautiful. I like the town very much. I would like to meet you near the park which is next to my house, because this park is big and wonderful. We can walk and talk.
Your dad can visit my parents. They are kind, funny, and talkative. Moreover, he can also walk along the streets of Samara or see the sights, for example the museum of cosmonautics or the country park. He can go to the restaurants, for example Hokku or Patari.
I'd like you to bring photos from our holidays together. I'll be happy, because these are our memories.
Write back soon!
Yuri
Привет, Марцела.
Я действительно хочу встретиться с тобой на следующей неделе, потому что Я очень скучаю по тебе.
Мой городок тихий и маленький, но он очень красивый. Мне очень сильно нравится этот городок. Я бы хотел встретиться с тобой рядом с парком, который находится возле моего дома, потому что он большой и великолепный. Мы можем погулять и пообщаться.
Твой отец может посетить моих родителей. Они добрые, весёлые и разговорчивые. Более того, он также может погулять по улицам Самары или посмотреть достопримечательности, например музей космонавтики или загородный парк. Он может сходить в рестораны, например Хокку или Патари.
Я бы хотел чтобы ты привезла фото с нашего совместного отдыха. Я буду счастлив, потому что это наши воспоминания.
Напиши обратное письмо!
Юрий
Writing
Hi, Marcela.
I really want to meet you next week, because I miss you very much.
it just flows better no grammatical mistake though
My town is quiet and small, but It's very beautiful.
I would like to meet you near the park which is next to my house, because thisthe park is big and wonderful.
flows better and you already started the its hard to know when to swap to this but this is not one of those times
generally in response for explanation. "do you want to go to the water park" " what is a water park" " it's this big amusement park..." generally like that but in this case its "the" not this
We can walk and talk.
Your dad can visit my parents.
They are kind, funny, and talkative.
I'll be happy, because these arwill be our memories.¶
I'll be happy, because we'll make new memories.
the sentence is grammatically correct but the flow is off
Write back soon!
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for 1 i think that you are doing a great job adhering to the rules of the language. if you were writing a paper in a highschool english class you wouldn't loose point's for grammar
but the flow is frankly not there and I'd suggest doing some more reading in order to see multiple different ways to present the same idea while still being grammatically correct. as it stands you are making sentences akin to an english grammar book rather than how'd you speak to a friend
My town is quiet and small, but Iit's very beautiful.
"it's" is not a proper noun
Moreover, he can also walk along the streets of Samara or see the sights, for examplesuch as the mMuseum of cCosmonautics or the cCountry pPark.
"for example" is good, but you can also express it in another way like "such as"
Also, don't forget to capitalize the proper nouns like "Museum of Cosmonautics" and "Country Park"
He can go to the restaurants, for example, Hokku or Patari.
The article "the" is not necessary before "restaurants"
I'll be happy, because these are our memories.
no comma needed
My town is quiet and small, but Iit's very beautiful.
lowercase "i" in it's
Moreover, he can also walk along the streets of Samara or see the sights, for example the museum of cosmastronautics or the country park.
Feedback
Looks great! Just some small corrections.
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I'll be happy, because these are our memories. I'll be happy no comma needed I'll be happy, because these the sentence is grammatically correct but the flow is off |
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Hi, Marcela. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I really want to meet you next week, because I miss you very much. I really want to meet you next week, it just flows better no grammatical mistake though |
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My town is quiet and small, but It's very beautiful. My town is quiet and small, but lowercase "i" in it's My town is quiet and small, but "it's" is not a proper noun This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I like the town very much. |
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I would like to meet you near the park which is next to my house, because this park is big and wonderful. I would like to meet you near the park which is next to my house, flows better and you already started the its hard to know when to swap to this but this is not one of those times generally in response for explanation. "do you want to go to the water park" " what is a water park" " it's this big amusement park..." generally like that but in this case its "the" not this |
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We can walk and talk. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Your dad can visit my parents. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They are kind, funny, and talkative. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Moreover, he can also walk along the streets of Samara or see the sights, for example the museum of cosmonautics or the country park. Moreover, he can also walk along the streets of Samara or see the sights, for example the museum of Moreover, he can also walk along the streets of Samara or see the sights, "for example" is good, but you can also express it in another way like "such as" Also, don't forget to capitalize the proper nouns like "Museum of Cosmonautics" and "Country Park" |
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He can go to the restaurants, for example Hokku or Patari. He can go to The article "the" is not necessary before "restaurants" |
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I'd like you to bring photos from our holidays together. |
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