Dec. 19, 2024
Nowadays, some people believe using public transportation is better for the environment than using private vehicles, others hold the opposite. Personally, I agree with this viewpoint for several reasons. Firstly, if you use public transport, you can save a lot of money because public transport is cheaper than private vehicles. For example, private vehicles consume gasoline or oil which costs a lot of money, and your vehicle may break down. Secondly, the more people use public transport, the easier it is to avoid traffic jams. Private vehicles can cause many accidents, and traffic jams, which cause harm to the environment. In conclusion, using public transportation has clear advantages for both the environment and personal finances.
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Nowadays, some people believe using public transportation is better for the environment than using private vehicles, whereas others hold the opposite opinion.
You need a conjunction to connect the two sentences
Personally, I agree with this viewpointe former for several reasons.
“The former” and “the latter” are really good words to know! “The former” is the first thing in a list of two things, and “the latter” is the second thing!
Firstly, if you use public transport, you can save a lot of money because public transport is cheaper than private vehicles.
For example, private vehicles consume gasoline orand oil, which costs a lot of money, and your vehicle may also break down.
Cars need both gasoline and oil, so using “and” feels more intuitive!
Secondly, the more people use public transport, the easier it is to avoid traffic jams.
Private vehicles can cause many accidents, and traffic jams, which cause harm to the environment.
In conclusion, using public transportation has clear advantages for both the environment and personal finances.
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Well written! No major issues, just minor tweaks to make it sound more native :)
Nowadays, some people believe using public transportation is better for the environment than using private vehicles, while others hold the opposite view.
You need to specify which opposite that people hold here. Since this is a contrasting statement it's better in writing to use a contrasting word like while. In spoken language you could get away with omitting it, but in that case you'd use tone or body language to emphasize the contrast
Private vehicles can cause many accidents, and traffic jams, which cause harm to the environment.
The oxford comma (comma after the last item in the list, before and - https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Serial_comma) is a stylistic choice, but even if you do use it, it's only for lists of 3 or more items. It's not used in lists of two items.
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It would probably have helped to mention finances in your opening sentence since 2 of your 4 points mention finances, as does your conclusion.
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Nowadays, some people believe using public transportation is better for the environment than using private vehicles, others holdthink the opposite.
“Hold” isn’t used in that way.
Personally, I agree with this viewpoint for several reasons.
Firstly, if you use public transport, you can save a lot of money because public transport is cheaper than private vehicles.
For example, private vehicles consume gasoline or oil which costs a lot of money, and your vehicle may break down.
Secondly, the more people use public transport, the easier it is to avoid traffic jams.
Private vehicles can cause many accidents, and traffic jams, which cause harm to the environment.
In conclusion, using public transportation has clear advantages for both the environment and personal finances.
For example, private vehicles consume gasoline or oil which costs a lot of money, and your vehicle may break down. This sentence has been marked as perfect! For example, private vehicles consume gasoline Cars need both gasoline and oil, so using “and” feels more intuitive! |
Secondly, the more people use public transport, the easier it is to avoid traffic jams. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Private vehicles can cause many accidents, and traffic jams, which cause harm to the environment. Private vehicles can cause many accidents Private vehicles can cause many accidents The oxford comma (comma after the last item in the list, before and - https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Serial_comma) is a stylistic choice, but even if you do use it, it's only for lists of 3 or more items. It's not used in lists of two items. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
In conclusion, using public transportation has clear advantages for both the environment and personal finances. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Nowadays, some people believe using public transportation is better for the environment than using private vehicles, others hold the opposite. Nowadays, some people believe using public transportation is better for the environment than using private vehicles, others “Hold” isn’t used in that way. Nowadays, some people believe using public transportation is better for the environment than using private vehicles, while others hold the opposite view. You need to specify which opposite that people hold here. Since this is a contrasting statement it's better in writing to use a contrasting word like while. In spoken language you could get away with omitting it, but in that case you'd use tone or body language to emphasize the contrast Nowadays, some people believe using public transportation is better for the environment than using private vehicles, whereas others hold the opposite opinion. You need a conjunction to connect the two sentences |
Personally, I agree with this viewpoint for several reasons. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Personally, I agree with th “The former” and “the latter” are really good words to know! “The former” is the first thing in a list of two things, and “the latter” is the second thing! |
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