Sept. 1, 2025
Would you want to travel to outer space?
If there are places like Avatar or Star Trek, I wouldn't hesitate to travel to outer space. However, I think it's going to be boring during the move to the destination. I want play ground and movie theater in spaceship at least.
Would you want to travel to outer space?
If there are places like Avatar or Star Trek, I wouldn't hesitate to travel to outer space.
However, I think it's going to be boring during the move to the destination.
I want at least a play ground and a movie theater in spaceship at least.
Sept. 2, 2025
Thank you very much for your kind corrections.
If there are places like in Avatar or Star Trek, I wouldn't hesitate to travel to outer spachere.
- This is a bit technical but Avatar is not a place nor is Star Trek, so need to put 'in' in between the two to show that you are specifically referring to worlds like Pandora in Avatar or whatever worlds exist in Star Trek
- Traveling to outer space means to outer space not to the worlds you are referring to so replaced them with 'there' so you specifically refer to the places in these films
However, I think it's going tothe journey to these worlds would be be boring during the move to the destination.
- You are talking about a hypothetical situation so you need to use the conditional tense 'it would be...' not 'it's going to be...'
- Bit unnatural to say 'during the move to the destination', just reworded this to sound more natural
I want play garound and movie theater inin the spaceship at least.
- Not sure if you meant something by 'playing ground' but that doesn't mean anything in English. Maybe you heard people say 'playing around' which just means to have fun
- Not sure what you meant by movie theater in this sentence. If you explain what you were trying to say in a comment then I can correct what you were trying to say here.
Sept. 1, 2025
Thank you very much for your kind corrections.
I don't think I'm good at writing English yet.
Regarding the last sentence, I wanted to convey that it would be nice if there was a playground where you could play soccer or baseball, and a movie theater where you could enjoy lots of movies inside the spaceship.
Sept. 2, 2025
Ah okay I understand, in that case you could write 'I want a playground and a movie theater in the spaceship at least'. Now that you've said it I don't know why I didn't see that at the start !
I think in Japanese languages you don't use articles (a, an, the etc) but in English they're compulsary a lot of the time.
You'll get better the more you practice!
Sept. 2, 2025
Thank you for giving me example sentences.
"A" and "the" are really difficult.
I'll keep working hard.
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If there are places like Avatar or Star Trek, I wouldn't hesitate to travel to outer space. If there are places like in Avatar or Star Trek, I wouldn't hesitate to travel t - This is a bit technical but Avatar is not a place nor is Star Trek, so need to put 'in' in between the two to show that you are specifically referring to worlds like Pandora in Avatar or whatever worlds exist in Star Trek - Traveling to outer space means to outer space not to the worlds you are referring to so replaced them with 'there' so you specifically refer to the places in these films This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, I think it's going to be boring during the move to the destination. However, I think - You are talking about a hypothetical situation so you need to use the conditional tense 'it would be...' not 'it's going to be...' - Bit unnatural to say 'during the move to the destination', just reworded this to sound more natural This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I want play ground and movie theater in spaceship at least. I want play - Not sure if you meant something by 'playing ground' but that doesn't mean anything in English. Maybe you heard people say 'playing around' which just means to have fun - Not sure what you meant by movie theater in this sentence. If you explain what you were trying to say in a comment then I can correct what you were trying to say here. I want at least a play |
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