May 21, 2021
World Tour Video
When I browsing through Netflix, I find out a video clip that is about World Tour.
It was originally broadcasted on a TV channel and my family members really like to watch these video series.
Because of the pandemic, my friends also watch the video series over and over again.
The video series show small cities all around world.
Unlikely the big cities, small cities have their own character and I am blowned away by the charming locations.
I want to travel to the city.
World Tour Video
When I browsing through Netflix, I find out a video clip that is about World Tour.
"found out" is usually used as "found out about xyz". It usually means someone informed you about a topic, you read about it in a book etc.
It was originally broadcasted on a TV channel and my family members really likes to watch these video series like these.
Your sentence is correct, but would sound more natural like this.
Because of the pandemic, my friends also watch the video series over and over again.
The video series shows small cities all around world.
You might also write "It" instead of the phrase "The video series" again.
Unlikely the big cities, small cities have their own character and I am blowned away by the charming locations.
"blown" is already passive, so you don't need to add an "ed"
I want to travel to the city.
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Very good! I only corrected very small issues. I haven't heard about this Netflix show before; I will check it out.
May 22, 2021
When I browsing through Netflix, I find out a video clip that is about World Tour.
I didn't know the usage of "found out". Thanks you for telling me about it :)
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Because of the pandemic, my friends also watch the video series over and over again. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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World Tour Video This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When I browsing through Netflix, I find out a video clip that is about World Tour. When I browsing through Netflix, I find "found out" is usually used as "found out about xyz". It usually means someone informed you about a topic, you read about it in a book etc. |
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It was originally broadcasted on a TV channel and my family members really like to watch these video series. It was originally broadcast Your sentence is correct, but would sound more natural like this. |
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The video series show small cities all around world. The video series shows small cities all around world. You might also write "It" instead of the phrase "The video series" again. |
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Unlikely the big cities, small cities have their own character and I am blowned away by the charming locations. Unlikely the big cities, small cities have their own character and I am blown "blown" is already passive, so you don't need to add an "ed" |
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I want to travel to the city. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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