April 17, 2021
        I would like to share my excitement about an event that took place 3 years ago. The sporting event I have witnessed is the 2018 FIFA World Cup - an international football tournament. It happened in Russia and some games were in Moscow where I lived. I used to work as a Steward and participated in a game Belgium versus Tunisia. I was not interested in a football, but this event was a tipping point in my attitude to this competition.
Furthermore, I can still remember the excitement that the public was sharing, it stays in my heart. The audience was fanatic about that game. I stood next to them with the fans from Tunisia and watched them - it was my job. They screamed and cried when someone scored a goal. The whole stadium was filled with joy, happiness. The players gave the same energy back. After the game we shared with colleges our thoughts about that day and discussed the most interesting moments in that work day. 
Eventually after that I started to engage in football life. My friends invited me to watch some domestic games, and we began to play football every weekend.
      
      
        Work as a Ssteward inat the 2018 FIFA World Cup in Russia
      
    
I would like to share my excitement about an event that took place 3 years ago.
      
        The sporting event I have witnessed iwas the 2018 FIFA World Cup - an international football tournament.
      
    
It happened in Russia, and some games were in Moscow, where I lived.
Alternative: "It took place in Russia..."
      
        I used to worked as a Ssteward and participated in a gamt the Belgium versus. Tunisia game.
      
    
"Used to" would imply that you weren't working at the time of the Cup.
"Participated in a game" = played in the game.
      
        I was not interested in a football, but this event was a tipping point in my attitude to this competition.
      
    
Alternative: "this event changed my mind" or "this event made me see things differently"
"A football" = a physical ball (soccer ball in the US)
"Football" (uncountable) = the game (soccer in the US)
      
        Furthermore, I can still remember the public's excitement that the public was sharing, it stays in my heartas if it were yesterday.
      
    
What you wrote is grammatically correct, but it sounds a bit unnatural.
"as if it were yesterday" is a great collocation to use here.
You could also say "I remember it vividly."
      
        The audience was fanaticcrazy about that game.
      
    
"Fanatic" is pretty much only used in terms of religious fanaticism
https://stanfordmag.org/contents/fan-or-fanatic
      
        I stood next to them with the fans from Tunisia and watched them - it was my job.
      
    
They screamed and cried whenever someone scored a goal.
What you wrote is correct, but this sounds slightly better to me.
      
        The whole stadium was filled with joy, and happiness.
      
    
The players gave the same energy back to the crowd.
      
        After the game we shared with colleges our thoughts about that day, my colleagues and I shared our thoughts and discussed the most interesting moments inof that worke day.
      
    
      
        EventualShortly after that, I started to engage in football life.
      
    
"Eventually after that" sounds quite odd to me. The collocation is usually "shortly after that" or "soon after that." If it wasn't shortly, you could just say, "Eventually, I started..."
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Really good! Most of my corrections were stylistic.
| The players gave the same energy back. The players gave the same energy back to the crowd. | 
| Work as a Steward in the 2018 FIFA World Cup in Russia Work as a  | 
| I would like to share my excitement about an event that took place 3 years ago. This sentence has been marked as perfect! | 
| The sporting event I have witnessed is the 2018 FIFA World Cup - an international football tournament. The sporting event I  | 
| It happened in Russia and some games were in Moscow where I lived. It happened in Russia, and some games were in Moscow, where I lived. Alternative: "It took place in Russia..." | 
| I used to work as a Steward and participated in a game Belgium versus Tunisia. I  "Used to" would imply that you weren't working at the time of the Cup. "Participated in a game" = played in the game. | 
| I was not interested in a football, but this event was a tipping point in my attitude to this competition. I was not interested in  Alternative: "this event changed my mind" or "this event made me see things differently" "A football" = a physical ball (soccer ball in the US) "Football" (uncountable) = the game (soccer in the US) | 
| Furthermore, I can still remember the excitement that the public was sharing, it stays in my heart. Furthermore, I can  What you wrote is grammatically correct, but it sounds a bit unnatural. "as if it were yesterday" is a great collocation to use here. You could also say "I remember it vividly." | 
| The audience was fanatic about that game. The audience was  "Fanatic" is pretty much only used in terms of religious fanaticism https://stanfordmag.org/contents/fan-or-fanatic | 
| I stood next to them with the fans from Tunisia and watched them - it was my job. I stood next to them with the fans from Tunisia and watched  | 
| They screamed and cried when someone scored a goal. They screamed and cried whenever someone scored a goal. What you wrote is correct, but this sounds slightly better to me. | 
| The whole stadium was filled with joy, happiness. The whole stadium was filled with joy | 
| After the game we shared with colleges our thoughts about that day and discussed the most interesting moments in that work day. After the game | 
| Eventually after that I started to engage in football life. 
 "Eventually after that" sounds quite odd to me. The collocation is usually "shortly after that" or "soon after that." If it wasn't shortly, you could just say, "Eventually, I started..." | 
| My friends invited me to watch some domestic games, and we began to play football every weekend. | 
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