May 20, 2021
Woken up by a mosquito
I was woken up by the sound of a flying mosquito at 4 A.M. and I cannot sleep again anytime soon. I saw it yesterday flying around in my room and I now regret that I did nothing. I have a bad sleeping habit, but luckily, I could sleep early yesterday. However, I woke up today because of the constant hum of a single mosquito flying around. My hate towards it grew bigger and bigger. It didn’t even bite me. It was just making noises near my ear to disturb me. I couldn’t do anything but to wake myself up and start to search for the mosquito. I know that using my phone’s flashlight in a dark room is effective for finding a mosquito, since it will cast a big shadow on the walls, so I used it. Eventually I found it and killed it, but now I cannot go back to sleep again. I hate mosquitoes. I once wished them to be eradicated completely, but I heard that they have an important role in the ecosystem so I guess I should abandon this hope. The ecosystem is important after all, more important than my death wish towards mosquitoes. I also heard there is a laser machine that kills mosquitoes in the air. I really need one if they are on sale.
Woken up by a mosquito
I was woken up by the sound of a flying mosquito flying at 4 A.M. and I cannot now I won't be able to fall asleep again anytime soon.
I saw it yesterday flying around in my room yesterday, and I now regret that I did nothingI wish I'd done something about it.
I have a bad sleeping habittrouble falling asleep, but luckily, I couldgot to sleep early yesterdaylast night.
You could also say "I have insomnia."
Saying you went to sleep yesterday sounds weird unless it was in the middle of the day.
However, I woke up today because of the constant hum of a single mosquito flying around.
My hate towards it grew bigger and biggerI grew to hate it more and more.
It didn’t even bite me.
It was just making noises near my ear to disturb me.
I couldn’t do anything but to wake myselfget up and start to searching for the mosquito.
I knoew that using my phone’s flashlight in a dark room iswould be effective for finding athe mosquito, since it will cast a big shadow on the walls of my dark room, so I used it.
Eventually I found it and killed it, but now I cannot go back to sleep again.
I hate mosquitoes.
I once wished for them to be eradicated completely, but Icompletely eradicated, but I've since heard that they have an important role in the ecosystem, so I guess I should abandon thisat hope.
The ecosystem is important after all, more important than my death wish towards mosquitoes.
I also heard there is a laser machine that kills mosquitoes in the air.
I really need one if they are on sale.
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Your English is really good so most of these are minor stylistic changes. Having a mosquito whining in your ear must be one of the worst things to wake up to >:(
May 21, 2021
Thank you! Yes, it was terrible. I hope this will never happen.
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Woken up by a mosquito This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I was woken up by the sound of a flying mosquito at 4 A.M. and I cannot sleep again anytime soon. I was woken up by the sound of a |
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I saw it yesterday flying around in my room and I now regret that I did nothing. I saw it |
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I have a bad sleeping habit, but luckily, I could sleep early yesterday. I have a You could also say "I have insomnia." Saying you went to sleep yesterday sounds weird unless it was in the middle of the day. |
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However, I woke up today because of the constant hum of a single mosquito flying around. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My hate towards it grew bigger and bigger.
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It didn’t even bite me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It was just making noises near my ear to disturb me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I couldn’t do anything but to wake myself up and start to search for the mosquito. I couldn’t do anything but |
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I know that using my phone’s flashlight in a dark room is effective for finding a mosquito, since it will cast a big shadow on the walls, so I used it. I kn |
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Eventually I found and killed it, but now I cannot go back to sleep again. |
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I once wished them to be eradicated completely, but I heard that they have an important role in the ecosystem so I guess I should abandon this hope. I once wished for them to be |
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The ecosystem is important after all, more important than my death wish towards mosquitoes. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I also heard there is a laser machine that kills mosquitoes in the air. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I really need one if they are on sale. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Eventually I found it and killed it, but now I cannot go back to sleep again. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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