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Tomo1110

Sept. 8, 2025

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Wise - Fintech App

I have a new assignment from 1st October in UK, while I am living in Germany now. Last week, I visited London and decided my new flat, making a preliminary contract with a real estate agent. The agent requested me to place a holding deposit. That’s why I transferred the money from my bank account with a German local bank by using Wise App. Making several taps, I could smoothly transfer the money to the real estate agent. It’s a really amazing experience of fintech app. I will continue to use this app after moving to London.

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I have a new assignment from 1st October in UK, whilebut I am living in Germany now.

Two options:
"I have a new assignment from 1st October in UK, but I am living in Germany now."
Correct, but very slightly strange sounding.

"While I am living in Germany now, I have a new assignment from 1st October in UK."
Flows more naturally, especially because it is now in chronological order.

Last week, I visited London and dsecidured my new flat, making a preliminary contract with a real estate agent.

That’s why I transferred the money from my bank account with a German local bank by using the Wise App.

Making severalWith just a few taps, I could smoothly transfer the money to the real estate agent.

If you want to emphasise how quick and easy it was, "with just a few taps" works nicely.

It’s a really amazing experience of fintech app experience.

Or:
"It's a really amazing example of fintech."

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Nice job! Your spelling is great.

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Tomo1110

Sept. 9, 2025

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Thanks for you comments!

Wise - Fintech App


I have a new assignment from 1st October in UK, while I am living in Germany now.


I have a new assignment from 1st October in UK, whilebut I am living in Germany now.

Two options: "I have a new assignment from 1st October in UK, but I am living in Germany now." Correct, but very slightly strange sounding. "While I am living in Germany now, I have a new assignment from 1st October in UK." Flows more naturally, especially because it is now in chronological order.

Last week, I visited London and decided my new flat, making a preliminary contract with a real estate agent.


Last week, I visited London and dsecidured my new flat, making a preliminary contract with a real estate agent.

The agent requested me to place a holding deposit.


That’s why I transferred the money from my bank account with a German local bank by using Wise App.


That’s why I transferred the money from my bank account with a German local bank by using the Wise App.

Making several taps, I could smoothly transfer the money to the real estate agent.


Making severalWith just a few taps, I could smoothly transfer the money to the real estate agent.

If you want to emphasise how quick and easy it was, "with just a few taps" works nicely.

It’s a really amazing experience of fintech app.


It’s a really amazing experience of fintech app experience.

Or: "It's a really amazing example of fintech."

I will continue to use this app after moving to London.


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