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Solen

Sept. 25, 2025

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Why read is important?

I think reading is really important for many reasons. I heard in a podcast that children who read a lot are more able to earn a lot of money compare to the other child. I think, with reading you improve your creativity, you will be more empathic and more open to the world. I also heard that in this podcast. I found it was really intersesting because I discovered informations I didn't know like that we read more than 100 000 words a day in screens. It's a huge number. But when we read words on screens, we aren't focus and we are not doing a deep reading like we were when we're reading a book.

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Why is read ising important?

I think reading is really importantessential for many reasons.

I heard in a podcast that children who read a lot are more able to earn a lot ofmore money compared to the other childchildren who don't read as much.

I think, with that reading helps you improve your creativity, you will be morer empathicy, and become more open to the world.

I also heard that in this podcast episode.

I found it was really intersesfascinating because I discovered informations I didn't know like that we, such as us reading more than 100 ,000 words a day in (our) screens.

It's a huge number.

But wWhen we read words on screens, we aren't focused, and we are not doing a deep reading like weas closely as we are when we're reading a book.

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Great job!

Solen's avatar
Solen

Sept. 26, 2025

1

Thanks !

marblemenow's avatar
marblemenow

Sept. 26, 2025

11

You're welcome.

Why is read ising important?

The verb here should be in the "ing" form and "is" should be before.

I think reading is really important for many reasons.

This sentence is ok, but I want to point out that with the correction I made to the title, you can see a pattern in these sorts of question - answer sentence pairings.

I heard in a podcast that children who read a lot are more able to earn a lot ofmore money compared to the other childchildren who don't.

Cleaned up the flow of the overall sentence a little bit. A minimal edit to what you wrote would be to fix "compared" and change "to other children". However with just those changes, the sentence reads awkwardly.

I think, with reading you improve your creativity, and you will be more empathic and more open to the world.

be careful with overusing the word "more" in you sentences. Repetition for multiple things with the same trait, more in this case, can usually be shorted to read easier and keep the same meaning.

I also heard that in thise podcast I listened to.

This just is a little more detailed version of what you had. What you had works grammatically, but the reader doesn't know what "this" is in this context because you are not talking about a specific podcast in this post, just that you heard things from one.

I found it wathis really intersesting because I discovered informations I didn't know like. For example, that we read more than 100 000 words a day ion screens.

Some spelling and breaking up this sentence into two different ones for flow.

IThat's a huge numberamount.

But when we read words on a screens, we aren't focused and we are not doing a deep reading like we weare when we're reading a book.

Some word choice cleanup.

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I agree reading is very important. It can be very hard these days to create time to do it though.

Solen's avatar
Solen

Sept. 26, 2025

1

Thanks for correcting me !

Why read is important?


Why is read ising important?

The verb here should be in the "ing" form and "is" should be before.

Why is read ising important?

I think reading is really important for many reasons.


I think reading is really important for many reasons.

This sentence is ok, but I want to point out that with the correction I made to the title, you can see a pattern in these sorts of question - answer sentence pairings.

I think reading is really importantessential for many reasons.

I heard in a podcast that children who read a lot are more able to earn a lot of money compare to the other child.


I heard in a podcast that children who read a lot are more able to earn a lot ofmore money compared to the other childchildren who don't.

Cleaned up the flow of the overall sentence a little bit. A minimal edit to what you wrote would be to fix "compared" and change "to other children". However with just those changes, the sentence reads awkwardly.

I heard in a podcast that children who read a lot are more able to earn a lot ofmore money compared to the other childchildren who don't read as much.

I think, with reading you improve your creativity, you will be more empathic and more open to the world.


I think, with reading you improve your creativity, and you will be more empathic and more open to the world.

be careful with overusing the word "more" in you sentences. Repetition for multiple things with the same trait, more in this case, can usually be shorted to read easier and keep the same meaning.

I think, with that reading helps you improve your creativity, you will be morer empathicy, and become more open to the world.

I also heard that in this podcast.


I also heard that in thise podcast I listened to.

This just is a little more detailed version of what you had. What you had works grammatically, but the reader doesn't know what "this" is in this context because you are not talking about a specific podcast in this post, just that you heard things from one.

I also heard that in this podcast episode.

It's a huge number.


IThat's a huge numberamount.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But when we read words on screens, we aren't focus and we are not doing a deep reading like we were when we're reading a book.


But when we read words on a screens, we aren't focused and we are not doing a deep reading like we weare when we're reading a book.

Some word choice cleanup.

But wWhen we read words on screens, we aren't focused, and we are not doing a deep reading like weas closely as we are when we're reading a book.

I found it was really intersesting because I discovered informations I didn't know like that we read more than 100 000 words a day in screens.


I found it wathis really intersesting because I discovered informations I didn't know like. For example, that we read more than 100 000 words a day ion screens.

Some spelling and breaking up this sentence into two different ones for flow.

I found it was really intersesfascinating because I discovered informations I didn't know like that we, such as us reading more than 100 ,000 words a day in (our) screens.

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