June 12, 2025
Why Fermented Protein Was Developed
Growing Protein Demand: As the global population increases and protein demand rises, traditional protein sources such as meat, fish, and dairy products are no longer sufficient to meet the need. Plant-based proteins and fermented proteins have become sustainable and viable alternatives.
Environment and Climate Change: Animal protein production requires large amounts of water, land, and energy, and it also generates significant greenhouse gas emissions. Fermented protein helps reduce these impacts by using less water, land, and energy.
Why Fermented Protein Was Developed
Growing Protein Demand: As the global population increases and the demand for protein demand rises, traditional protein sources such as meat, fish, and dairy products are no longer sufficient to meet theglobal need.
"meet the need" on its own at the end sounds a bit weird. You could have also said "to meet global demand" or something similar.
Plant-based proteins and fermented proteins have become sustainable and viable alternatives.
Environment and Climate Change: Animal protein production requires large amounts of water, land, and energy, and it also generates significant greenhouse gas emissions.
Fermented protein helps reduce these impacts by using less water, land, and energy.
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Growing Protein Demand: As the global population increases and protein demand rises, traditional protein sources such as meat, fish, and dairy products are no longer sufficient to meet the need for protein.
"meet the need" at the end of a sentence sounds very strange. "Meet the need for..." "Meet the need of..." - it requires a follow-on.
Alternate:
"Traditional sources of protein such as meat, fish, and dairy are no longer sufficient to meet demand as the global population rises."
"Traditional sources of protein such as meat, fish, and dairy are no longer sufficient to meet the need of the people as the global population increases and demand rises."
Plant-based proteins and fermented proteins have become sustainable and viable alternatives.
Environment and Climate Change: Animal protein production requires large amounts of water, land, and energy, and it also generates significant greenhouse gas emissions.
Fermented protein helps reduce these impacts by using less water, land, and energy.
June 13, 2025
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Plant-based proteins and fermented proteins have become sustainable and viable alternatives. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Growing Protein Demand: As the global population increases and protein demand rises, traditional protein sources such as meat, fish, and dairy products are no longer sufficient to meet the need. Growing Protein Demand: As the global population increases and "meet the need" at the end of a sentence sounds very strange. "Meet the need for..." "Meet the need of..." - it requires a follow-on. Alternate: "Traditional sources of protein such as meat, fish, and dairy are no longer sufficient to meet demand as the global population rises." "Traditional sources of protein such as meat, fish, and dairy are no longer sufficient to meet the need of the people as the global population increases and demand rises." Growing Protein Demand: As the global population increases and the demand for protein "meet the need" on its own at the end sounds a bit weird. You could have also said "to meet global demand" or something similar. |
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Environment and Climate Change: Animal protein production requires large amounts of water, land, and energy, and it also generates significant greenhouse gas emissions. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Fermented protein helps reduce these impacts by using less water, land, and energy. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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