Kindred Spirit

Sept. 7, 2025

Why english?

Hello, good morning(or whenever you are reading this)
Im going to tell why i started study english nowadays. I always been studyng english in school but no in an academy or something like that, however, in the future i will study a degree in electronic engineerin on UC when i finish my higher lever training cycle, and then go on board to do some postgrade based in space, automation, probably in germany.

Because of it i need to improve my abilities on this, i supose it's never too late for this. I'am to exited to star this new age of my life. Tomorrow im texting my academy for take my level exam, im sure at least i'll do B1 level.

When i get C1 im sure that i could study german o french until get C1 on both.

I had got myself a book called "They came to baghdad" by Agatha Christie and it's so cool. Im learning a lot of new words, phrasal verbs and how to write in orderly manner

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My fathers tought me which is my favorite band of al times, Led Zeppelin, the also tought me others like Black Sabbath, Queen, Smiths, The door and Pink Floyd to.

Hola, buenos días (O cuando sea que estés leyendo esto)
Os voy a contar porque empecé a estudiar inglés ahora mismo. Siempre he estado estudiando inglés pero nunca en una academia o algo parecido, sin embargo, en un futuro estudiare un grado de ingeniería electrónica en la UC cuando termine mi ciclo formativo de grado superior y luego irme al extranjero para hacer algún máster sobre el espacio, automatización, probablemente en Alemania.

Debido a eso necesito impulsar mis habilidades en esto, supongo que nunca es demasiado tarde para eso. Estoy muy emocionado por empezar esta nueva etapa en mi vida. Mañana escribiré a mi academia para hacer el examen de nivel, estoy seguro de que al menos tendré B1.

Cuando consiga el C1 estoy seguro de que estudiaré alemán o francés hasta el C1 también

Me he conseguido a mi mismo un libro llamado "They came to baghdad" de Agatha Christie y esta muy bien, estoy aprendiendo un montón de palabras, verbos frasales y como escribir de forma ordenada

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Mis padre me enseñaron la cual es mi banda favorita Led Zeppelin, También me me enseñaron otras como Black Sabbath, Quee, Smiths, The doors and Pink Floyd to.

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Why eEnglish?

"England" and "English" should be capitalised as they're country names.

Hello, gGood morning (or whenever you are reading this) ,
I'm going to tell why iI started study eing English nowadays.

- "I'm" needs an apostrophe
- "tell" in this case needs "you" after. If you use "to explain why" instead, "you" isn't needed.
- Either "started studying English" or "started to study English".
- Nowadays sounds a bit weird here. Consider using "recently" instead.

I have always been studyng estudied English in school but not in an academy or someanything like that, h. However, in the future i, I will study a degree in electronic engineerin on UC when ig at UC after I finish my higher lever training cycle, and then go on board to do some postgrade baseduate study in space, and automation, probably in gGermany.

- "Something like that" is perfectly OK too, but "anything" emphasises that you're dismissing the idea of academies etc. I think it sounds a bit more natural
- I recommend ending the sentence before "however", otherwise the whole sentence becomes very long.
- I assume UC is the institution? In which case you study "at" UC.

Because of it ithis, I need to improve my English abilities on this, i- I suppose it's never too late for this.to start!

I feel it isn't 100% clear what "my abilities on this" refers to. Make it very clear for a more concise style.

I'am to excited to start this new age of my life.

"Age" is a little strange here - that tends to refer to a **really** long time. "Era" fits better (a significant portion of one's life, up to maybe 10-15 years).

Tomorrow im texI'm contacting my academy for takto organise my level exam, i. I'm sure I'll get at least i'll do B1 level.

- In my opinion, "texting" is informal and works best when you're using a "texting" app, such as iMessage, WhatsApp or Snapchat. "Contacting" sounds more natural here because the "academy" is an institution, rather than an individual person or a phone number.
- To "get" exam results sounds more natural than to "do" exam results. (e.g. "I got an A" instead of "I did an A").

When iI get C1 i, I'm sure that iI could study gGerman o fr French until I get C1 on both.

I had gobought myself a book called "They cCame to bBaghdad" by Agatha Christie and it's so cool.

Technically correct, but "I had got" works best if you're referring to a specific time. For example, "I went to the beach last year. I had gotten a brand new book, so I took it with me".

Here, you haven't established a specific time/memory, so use simple past tense for a more natural sound.

I'm learning a lot of new words, phrasal verbs and how to write in an orderly manner
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My fathers tought me which is showed me my favorite band of all times, Led Zeppelin, tand he also toughtshowed me others like Black Sabbath, Queen, The Smiths, The dDoors and Pink Floyd too.

Note: if you have two fathers, use:
"My fathers showed... "
"and they also showed me..."

Feedback

Great job! Your variety of vocabulary and grammar patterns are great, and your personality is very clear in your writing.
There are a few spelling mistakes, but most of my feedback is focused on little word choices that elevate your writing to fluent level. Stick with it, and you'll gradually internalise all these details.

Keep it up!

Why english?

Why eEnglish?

"England" and "English" should be capitalised as they're country names.

Hello, good morning(or whenever you are reading this) Im going to tell why i started study english nowadays.

Hello, gGood morning (or whenever you are reading this) ,
I'm going to tell why iI started study eing English nowadays.

- "I'm" needs an apostrophe - "tell" in this case needs "you" after. If you use "to explain why" instead, "you" isn't needed. - Either "started studying English" or "started to study English". - Nowadays sounds a bit weird here. Consider using "recently" instead.

I always been studyng english in school but no in an academy or something like that, however, in the future i will study a degree in electronic engineerin on UC when i finish my higher lever training cycle, and then go on board to do some postgrade based in space, automation, probably in germany.

I have always been studyng estudied English in school but not in an academy or someanything like that, h. However, in the future i, I will study a degree in electronic engineerin on UC when ig at UC after I finish my higher lever training cycle, and then go on board to do some postgrade baseduate study in space, and automation, probably in gGermany.

- "Something like that" is perfectly OK too, but "anything" emphasises that you're dismissing the idea of academies etc. I think it sounds a bit more natural - I recommend ending the sentence before "however", otherwise the whole sentence becomes very long. - I assume UC is the institution? In which case you study "at" UC.

Because of it i need to improve my abilities on this, i supose it's never too late for this.

Because of it ithis, I need to improve my English abilities on this, i- I suppose it's never too late for this.to start!

I feel it isn't 100% clear what "my abilities on this" refers to. Make it very clear for a more concise style.

I'am to exited to star this new age of my life.

I'am to excited to start this new age of my life.

"Age" is a little strange here - that tends to refer to a **really** long time. "Era" fits better (a significant portion of one's life, up to maybe 10-15 years).

Tomorrow im texting my academy for take my level exam, im sure at least i'll do B1 level.

Tomorrow im texI'm contacting my academy for takto organise my level exam, i. I'm sure I'll get at least i'll do B1 level.

- In my opinion, "texting" is informal and works best when you're using a "texting" app, such as iMessage, WhatsApp or Snapchat. "Contacting" sounds more natural here because the "academy" is an institution, rather than an individual person or a phone number. - To "get" exam results sounds more natural than to "do" exam results. (e.g. "I got an A" instead of "I did an A").

When i get C1 im sure that i could study german o french until get C1 on both.

When iI get C1 i, I'm sure that iI could study gGerman o fr French until I get C1 on both.

I had got myself a book called "They came to baghdad" by Agatha Christie and it's so cool.

I had gobought myself a book called "They cCame to bBaghdad" by Agatha Christie and it's so cool.

Technically correct, but "I had got" works best if you're referring to a specific time. For example, "I went to the beach last year. I had gotten a brand new book, so I took it with me". Here, you haven't established a specific time/memory, so use simple past tense for a more natural sound.

Im learning a lot of new words, phrasal verbs and how to write in orderly manner (More text to fill out) My fathers tought me which is my favorite band of al times, Led Zeppelin, the also tought me others like Black Sabbath, Queen, Smiths, The door and Pink Floyd to.

I'm learning a lot of new words, phrasal verbs and how to write in an orderly manner
.¶

(More text to fill out)


My fathers tought me which is showed me my favorite band of all times, Led Zeppelin, tand he also toughtshowed me others like Black Sabbath, Queen, The Smiths, The dDoors and Pink Floyd too.

Note: if you have two fathers, use: "My fathers showed... " "and they also showed me..."

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