June 1, 2021
Why do Japanese love "Demon Slayer"?
When I heard a name of "Demon Slayer" was last year after COVID 19 have occurred and made all over the world into pandemic. I read several episodes of it by an online magazine sites. I wasn't impressed like most Japanese people, who commented that this animation was so great and couldn't stop reading or watching until they finish all episodes they were able to.
Coincidently, a friend of mine was interested in watching it on Netflix. So we sew all seasons together. Yes, I thought a screen images were beautiful and a story wasn't neither too complicated nor too simple. The story was about that battles between demons, which eat human being and young people, who chosen as a fighter. Why were many Japanese crazy about this story? Why did it give rise to a social phenomenon in Japan?
In my opinion, this story described about human love. Also, it wasn't not only show us all fighters' background and sad families circumstances, but also all demons' desires or sadness minutely. In addition, we could feel a genuine love as young fighters sacrificed their lives to save people from demons without any reward. Full of pure souls were in "Demon Slayer". Now in Japan, we have known that there aren't many Japanese who have a beautiful spirit and human love like those younger fighters in it. I think that is the reason, which it attracted us and developed a mania.
In Japan, the sales of movie "Demon Slayer" broke an all-time box-office record. It is an amazing! Yesterday after I watched it at the theater, I was stirred by deep emotion.
Why dDo Japanese lLove "Demon Slayer"?
In English, the first letter of all nouns, verbs, adjetives, adverbs, etc., in the title is capitalized.
When I first heard athe name of "Demon Slayer", it was last year, right after COVID -19 have occurd begun to spread and made all over the world into pandemiccreated a pandemic worldwide.
I read about several of its episodes of it by an online magazine sites.
I wasn't impressed , unlike most Japanese people, who commented that ithis animation was so great and that they couldn't stop reading or watching it until they finish all the episodes they were able toat they could.
Coincidently, a friend of mine was interested in watching it on Netflix.
So we seaw all seasons together.
Yes, I thought athe screen images were beautiful and athat the story wasn't neither too complicated nor too simple.
The story was about that battles between demons, which eat human beings, and young peoplerson, who is chosen as a fighter.
Why were so many Japanese crazy about this story?
Why did it give rise to a social phenomenon in Japan?
In my opinion, this story described abouts human love.
Also, it wasn't noIt didn't only show us all the fighters' backgrounds and sad familiesy circumstances, but also all the demons' desires or sadness minutely.
I don't know what you mean by "minutely".
In addition, we could feel a genuine love asemotional connection as the young fighters sacrificed their lives to save people from the demons without any reward in return.
"Love" doesn't really fit here, as it sounds like you're saying that people love that the fighters are sacrificing themselves.
Full of pure souls were in "Demon Slayer""Demon Slayer" was full of pure souls.
Now inIn modern-day Japan, we have known that there aren't many Japanese who have apossess such beautiful spirits and humanfeel (?) love like those younger fighters in it.
I think that is the reason, which it attracted us and developed a maniahad a mania develop around it.
In Japan, the sales of the movie "Demon Slayer" broke an all-time box-office record.
It is an amazing!
"It is" is often said/written as "it's".
Yesterday after I watched it at the theater, I was stirrtouched by the deep emotion.
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Great Job! Just a few corrections!
June 4, 2021
Thank you for your correction. I should more careful to write a journal for less mistakes. Have a lovely day!!
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In addition, we could feel a genuine love as young fighters sacrificed their lives to save people from demons without any reward. In addition, we could feel a genuine "Love" doesn't really fit here, as it sounds like you're saying that people love that the fighters are sacrificing themselves. |
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Why do Japanese love "Demon Slayer"? Why In English, the first letter of all nouns, verbs, adjetives, adverbs, etc., in the title is capitalized. |
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When I heard a name of "Demon Slayer" was last year after COVID 19 have occurred and made all over the world into pandemic. When I first heard |
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I read several episodes of it by an online magazine sites. I read about several of its episodes o |
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I wasn't impressed like most Japanese people, who commented that this animation was so great and couldn't stop reading or watching until they finish all episodes they were able to. I wasn't impressed |
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Coincidently, a friend of mine was interested in watching it on Netflix. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So we sew all seasons together. So we s |
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Yes, I thought a screen images were beautiful and a story wasn't neither too complicated nor too simple. Yes, I thought |
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The story was about that battles between demons, which eat human being and young people, who chosen as a fighter. The story was about |
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Why were many Japanese crazy about this story? Why were so many Japanese crazy about this story? |
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Why did it give rise to a social phenomenon in Japan? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In my opinion, this story described about human love. In my opinion, this story describe |
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Also, it wasn't not only show us all fighters' background and sad families circumstances, but also all demons' desires or sadness minutely.
I don't know what you mean by "minutely". |
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Full of pure souls were in "Demon Slayer".
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Now in Japan, we have known that there aren't many Japanese who have a beautiful spirit and human love like those younger fighters in it.
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I think that is the reason, which it attracted us and developed a mania. I think that is the reason |
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In Japan, the sales of movie "Demon Slayer" broke an all-time box-office record. In Japan, the sales of the movie "Demon Slayer" broke an all-time box-office record. |
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It is an amazing! It is an amazing! "It is" is often said/written as "it's". |
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Yesterday after I watched it at the theater, I was stirred by deep emotion. Yesterday after I watched it at the theater, I was |
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