April 7, 2021
Why do I go to sutdy abroad
Actually, I did not go to study abroad until I was a high school student because I am afraid I cannot communicate with other country people well and befriend them. However, I noticed that I have been able to get along with various kinds of people, so I want to try my communication skills in different countries. Now, I cannot speak English well and do not have friends where I go to study. However, I am so excited that my new life will begin.
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Feedback
Good luck! Your written English is pretty decent and I'm sure it'll improve as you write more and meet new friends.
April 12, 2021
Thank you for your kindness, I'll keep making an effort to improve my skills.
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Why do I go to sutdy abroad Why |
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Actually, I did not go to study abroad until I was a high school student because I am afraid I cannot communicate with other country people well and befriend them. Actually, I did Since the sentence was talking about something in the past, I updated the tenses. |
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However, I noticed that I have been able to get along with various kinds of people, so I want to try my communication skills in different countries. However, I've noticed that I have been able to get along with |
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Now, I cannot speak English well and do not have friends where I go to study.
Rewrote the sentence slightly to make it sound more natural. |
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However, I am so excited that my new life will begin. However, I am so excited that my new life will begin soon. |
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