Sept. 5, 2025
why did we come to life
Everyday I think about that why did we come to life, and it is possible parallel universe.. Maybe it is true, but how can I create my reality and align with my reality. Am I talking nonsense idk maybe god is know if there is a God...
I've seen stuff 'manifesto' on Instagram everybody say that 'yes I think that and it happend' do you belive in this stuff.
If such a thing really exists I will do that so 'manifesto'
good night :)
Her gün neden hayata geldiğimizi düşünüyorum ve paralel evrenin varlığı mümkün mü diye düşünüyorum. Belki de bu doğrudur, ama nasıl kendi gerçekliğimi yaratabilir ve onunla uyum sağlayabilirim? Saçma sapan konuşuyor muyum bilmiyorum, belki de Tanrı varsa bunu Tanrı bilir...
Instagram'da "manifesto" diye bir şey gördüm, herkes "evet, ben de öyle düşünüyorum ve oldu" diyor. Siz bu tür şeylere inanıyor musunuz?
Eğer böyle bir şey gerçekten varsa, ben de o "manifesto"yu yapacağım.
İyi geceler :)
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Am I talking nonsense idk maybe god iswould know if there is a God...
I've seen stuff 'manifesto'ations on Instagram where everybody sayid that 'yes I thinkought about that and it happened' d. Do you believe in this stuff.?
"manifesto" -> a statement or written piece outlining a person's views or goals
"manifestation" -> something that has been appeared. I think for the specific movement you're talking about, they also talk about "affirmations" but that term might not be familar to native speakers who have never encountered people involved in that movement.
If such a thing really exists I will do that so 'manifesto'
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good night :)
Sept. 7, 2025
thank you :)
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I've seen stuff 'manifesto' on Instagram everybody say thats 'yes I think that and ibelieve that happened' d. Do you believe in this stuff.?
If such a thing really exists I will do thatit, so 'manifesto'
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good night :)
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Good job :)
Sept. 7, 2025
thank you :)
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good night :)
Sept. 7, 2025
thank you :)
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good night :)
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I don't do social media really so I have no idea what you are talking about with 'manifesto'. But I tried to make corrections that made it easier to read regardless of the context.
Sept. 7, 2025
thank you :)
why did we come to life
Every day, I think about that why didwhy we coame to life, and it isf a possible parallel universe is possible.. Maybe it is true, but how can I create my reality and align with my reality.?
[Every day,] - 2 words and add a comma to emphasize.
[I think about why we came to life,] - you don't need to add "that" because there is no subject that you are referring to before this. "did" is also not necessary.
[and if a parallel universe is possible] - If you're wondering if the idea of a parallel universe is possible, you have to add "if" because it is hypothetical (could be real or could not be real).
Am I talking nonsense idk maybe god is knows if there is a God...
[maybe god knows if there is a God...] - you don't "is" in this sentence because "know" is a verb. Someone "knows" something. Someone cannot "is know".
I've seen stuff like 'manifesto' on Instagram, everybody say that 'yes I think that and it happened' do you believe in this stuff.?
[I've seen stuff like 'manifesto' on Instagram, ] - you can use "like" to introduce an example, add the comma at the end of a clause
[happened, believe, stuff?] - fix spelling and add a question mark when you ask a question.
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Good work! I understand what you are trying to say, just work on not adding extra verbs.
Sept. 7, 2025
thank you :):)
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