Oct. 1, 2025
Who I am? Where I am in my life?
Hello! My name is Aila.
I would like to know English very well , but I don’t have enough money for English teacher.
So I decided to learn English yourself.
At this time isn’t easy for me, because I lost myself. Knowing English will help me get into a masters program. I want to learn a new profession, maybe it helps me define who I am ? I want to work for the benefit of people and benefit society.
Who I am I? Where I am I in my life?
In questions, the verb usually comes before the pronoun.
For example, "You are at the shops" becomes "Are you at the shops?" to make it a question.
Hello!
My name is Aila.
I would like to know how to speak English very well , but I don’t have enough money for an English teacher.
People don't really use "know" when talking about languages. Examples of better replacements are "understand", "speak", or "know how to speak". Usually when someone says they know how to speak a language then it also means they can read/write/use it, so "speak" can be used for generally knowing how to use a language.
So I decided to learn English yourby myself.
At this timeCurrently it isn’t easy for me, because I've lost myself.
1. "At this time" is understandable but sounds quite formal. "Currently" or "right now" are more natural.
2. "I've lost myself" sounds quite poetic. It's not necessarily wrong, but people would probably say something like "because I'm not sure who I am", or "I'm not sure what I want from life".
Knowing how to speak English will help me get into a masters program.
I want to learntake up a new profession, m. Maybe it would helps me define who I am ?
"Profession" sounds a bit formal. Most people would probably just say "I want to start a new job".
I want to work for the benefit of people and benefit society.
This sentence is grammatically correct, but repeating "benefit" twice makes it sound a bit awkward. Maybe you could just say
"I want to work for the benefit of people and society"
or
"I want to work for the benefit of people and help society".
Feedback
Good luck with your English studies!
I would like to knowlearn English very well , but I don’t have enough money for an English teacher.
Or you could say "I don't have enough money to hire an English teacher."
So I decided to learn English myourself.
At this timeThis isn’t easy for me, because I lost myself.
Knowing English will help me get into a master's program.
I want to learn a new profession, maybe it helps me define who I am ?
I want to work for the benefit of people and benefit society.
Who I am? Where I am in my life?
Hello!
My name is Aila.
I would like to know how to speak English verreally well , but I don’t have enough money for English teacher.
This sounds more natural than the original wording.
So I decided to learn English yourby myself.
At this time it isn’t easy for me, because I lost myself.
Need to add it before isn't easy.
Knowing English will help me get into a masters program.
I want to learn a new profession, maybe it will helps me define who I am ?
I want to work for the benefit of people and benefit society.
Feedback
Overall really great! Good luck in your journey!
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1. "At this time" is understandable but sounds quite formal. "Currently" or "right now" are more natural. 2. "I've lost myself" sounds quite poetic. It's not necessarily wrong, but people would probably say something like "because I'm not sure who I am", or "I'm not sure what I want from life". |
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Knowing English will help me get into a masters program. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Knowing English will help me get into a master's program. Knowing how to speak English will help me get into a masters program. |
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I want to learn a new profession, maybe it helps me define who I am ? I want to learn a new profession, maybe it will help This sentence has been marked as perfect! I want to "Profession" sounds a bit formal. Most people would probably just say "I want to start a new job". |
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I want to work for the benefit of people and benefit society. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! I want to work for the benefit of people and benefit society. This sentence is grammatically correct, but repeating "benefit" twice makes it sound a bit awkward. Maybe you could just say "I want to work for the benefit of people and society" or "I want to work for the benefit of people and help society". |
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