Sept. 6, 2025
Hello ladies and gentlemen , first of all my name is Mohamed (Islamic name )
you can easily pronounce it Muh-HAM-uhd. I have reached the eighteen's years old . also I'm a computer science student esspecially in RedTeaming (Cyber Security Track)
that's all about me . I'm just want to write everyday using hard worlds and learn .. .to be really good at English and landed a job easy in the future.
Hello Ladies and Gentlemen . My name is Mohamed, an Islamic name, you can pronounce it Muh-HAM-uhd). I’m 18 years old .also I'm a computer science student , especially interested in Red Teaming within the Cybersecurity field. I want to write every day using advanced vocabulary . the main purpose is to improve my English, and make it easier to land a job in the future.
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I think you can get away with capitalizing every word in your title here because it's so short. Also, make sure there aren't any spaces between your words and any punctuation marks you add.
Hello, ladies and gentlemen , f. First of all, my name is Mohamed (an Islamic name )
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Be sure to split up run-on sentences, like what you originally had, into complete separate ones whenever you can. You could even go further by replacing the semicolon I added with a period and capitalizing "You."
I have reached theturned eighteen's years old .
To "turn" a certain age is a more common expression in English.
aAlso, I'm a computer science student esspeciallyizing in Red Teaming (Cyber Ssecurity Track)
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Search up industry-specific words in a search bar and see what comes up. Those results should show you how to space out those terms.
I'm just want to write every day using hard worlds and to learn . . . to be really good at English andso I can easily landed a job easy in the future.
These were just a couple of grammatical corrections.
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Cybersecurity sounds tough. Do your best!
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"you can easily pronounce it Muh-HAM-uhd." is a sentence I could see working in some settings, but it sounds kind of snarky in an introduction.
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Who am I ? Who am I Who I think you can get away with capitalizing every word in your title here because it's so short. Also, make sure there aren't any spaces between your words and any punctuation marks you add. |
Hello ladies and gentlemen , first of all my name is Mohamed (Islamic name ) you can easily pronounce it Muh-HAM-uhd. Hello, ladies and gentlemen Hello ladies and gentlemen "you can easily pronounce it Muh-HAM-uhd." is a sentence I could see working in some settings, but it sounds kind of snarky in an introduction. Hello, ladies and gentlemen Be sure to split up run-on sentences, like what you originally had, into complete separate ones whenever you can. You could even go further by replacing the semicolon I added with a period and capitalizing "You." |
I have reached the eighteen's years old . I have I I have To "turn" a certain age is a more common expression in English. |
also I'm a computer science student esspecially in RedTeaming (Cyber Security Track) that's all about me . I'm also I'm also I think you meant specializing vs especially. Specializing = having a specific focus in.
Search up industry-specific words in a search bar and see what comes up. Those results should show you how to space out those terms. |
I'm just want to write everyday using hard worlds and learn .. .to be really good at English and landed a job easy in the future. I I "..." can be used show a pause in a sentence, but this isn't the sort of sentence for it as written. In this case the sentence works better with the changes I made. I These were just a couple of grammatical corrections. |
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