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TOMO_o

Nov. 17, 2025

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Where were you born?

I was born and raised in Chigasaki where is famous as a surfing town in Japan. I used to play surfing when I was teenager, but since I saw JAWS, I quit surfing. However, I've been thinking to move where is nearby my office.

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I was born and raised in Chigasaki whereich is famous as a surfing town in Japan.

I used to playgo surfing when I was teenager, but since I saw JAWS, I quit surfing.

However, I've been thinking to move about moving somewhere is nearby my office.

"thinking to" is not really used, "planning to" is, but also implies more certainty than "thinking". In a casual conversation, people wouldn't find it that wrong but in writing it doesn't.

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Personally, my home town is a town in Ireland called Waterford. Within Ireland it's probably most known for tourism, especially Viking related stuff, or maybe sport (though I don't follow sport much myself, so I don't remember which one we're actually good at :p).

Outside Ireland, if people have heard of it at all, it's usually to do with the glass company that was founded there.

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TOMO_o

Nov. 18, 2025

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Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
The English that comes to mind is still full of mistakes, so I will try to correct it little by little to improve the accuracy.
I don't have enough time to study.

Where were you born?

I was born and raised in Chigasaki whereich is famous as a surfing town in Japan.

I used to play surfing when I was teenager, but since I saw JAWS, I quit surfing.

Grammatically correct, but I would recommend something more natural sounding, like: "but after seeing the film 'JAWS', I quit surfing." or "but I quit surfing after seeing JAWS"

For whatever reason, it's more natural to use the continuous form of the verb after the word "after": "after eating", "after seeing", "after walking"

However, I've been thinking to move somewhere that is nearby my office.

This sentence is a bit confusing and lacking information that connects to the previous sentences.

"I've been thinking" means that this is in the future.

But the rest of the story is about the past.

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TOMO_o

Nov. 18, 2025

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Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
The English that comes to mind is still full of mistakes, so I will try to correct it little by little to improve the accuracy.
I don't have enough time to study.

I was born and raised in Chigasaki, whereich is famous as a surfing town in Japan.

I used to play surfing when I was a teenager, but since I saw JAWS, I quit surfing.

However, I've been thinkconsidering moving to mova place where is nearbyI can surf close to my office.

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TOMO_o

Nov. 18, 2025

74

Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
The English that comes to mind is still full of mistakes, so I will try to correct it little by little to improve the accuracy.
I don't have enough time to study.

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If you do just a little every day, you will be much better in one year!

Where were you born?


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I was born and raised in Chigasaki where is famous as a surfing town in Japan.


I was born and raised in Chigasaki, whereich is famous as a surfing town in Japan.

I was born and raised in Chigasaki whereich is famous as a surfing town in Japan.

I was born and raised in Chigasaki whereich is famous as a surfing town in Japan.

I used to play surfing when I was teenager, but since I saw JAWS, I quit surfing.


I used to play surfing when I was a teenager, but since I saw JAWS, I quit surfing.

I used to play surfing when I was teenager, but since I saw JAWS, I quit surfing.

Grammatically correct, but I would recommend something more natural sounding, like: "but after seeing the film 'JAWS', I quit surfing." or "but I quit surfing after seeing JAWS" For whatever reason, it's more natural to use the continuous form of the verb after the word "after": "after eating", "after seeing", "after walking"

I used to playgo surfing when I was teenager, but since I saw JAWS, I quit surfing.

However, I've been thinking to move where is nearby my office.


However, I've been thinkconsidering moving to mova place where is nearbyI can surf close to my office.

However, I've been thinking to move somewhere that is nearby my office.

This sentence is a bit confusing and lacking information that connects to the previous sentences. "I've been thinking" means that this is in the future. But the rest of the story is about the past.

However, I've been thinking to move about moving somewhere is nearby my office.

"thinking to" is not really used, "planning to" is, but also implies more certainty than "thinking". In a casual conversation, people wouldn't find it that wrong but in writing it doesn't.

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