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alexwong2164

May 28, 2021

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When young meet old!

To improve my Japanese I am always making new friends from internet.

Danger? Sure 100%.

Today I made a new female friend.

She send me a video about how to distinguish man’s intention.

Whether he is really wants to learning or just try to tease woman.

I watched the video. (ナンパ目的のユーザーの見極め方)

It has some good points but I give her a lesson.

You should protect yourself.

But you should take the risk trust that I am a safe person.

The more trust on me the more you can explore.

Because I am doing the same to you.

Corrections

When young meets old!

To improve my Japanese I am always making new friends fromon the internet.

Danger?

This a technically incorrect sentence fragment but it's okay in informal writing.

Sure 100%.

Same as above.

Today I made a new female friend.

She sendt me a video about how to distinguish a man’s intention.

Whether he is really wantstrying to learning or just trywants to tease a woman.

I watched the video.

(ナンパ目的のユーザーの見極め方)

It has some good points but I give her a lessonalso gave her some advice.

You should protect yourself.

But you should take the risk and trust that I am a safe person.

The more you trust on me the more you can explore.

Because I am doing the same towith you.

"Doing something to someone" makes it sound like that something is bad.

When young meet old!


When young meets old!

To improve my Japanese I am always making new friends from internet.


To improve my Japanese I am always making new friends fromon the internet.

Danger?


Danger?

This a technically incorrect sentence fragment but it's okay in informal writing.

Sure 100%.


Sure 100%.

Same as above.

Today I made a new female friend.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

She send me a video about how to distinguish man’s intention.


She sendt me a video about how to distinguish a man’s intention.

Whether he is really wants to learning or just try to tease woman.


Whether he is really wantstrying to learning or just trywants to tease a woman.

I watched the video.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

(ナンパ目的のユーザーの見極め方)


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It has some good points but I give her a lesson.


It has some good points but I give her a lessonalso gave her some advice.

You should protect yourself.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But you should take the risk trust that I am a safe person.


But you should take the risk and trust that I am a safe person.

The more trust on me the more you can explore.


The more you trust on me the more you can explore.

Because I am doing the same to you.


Because I am doing the same towith you.

"Doing something to someone" makes it sound like that something is bad.

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