June 13, 2025
The first time to Mrs. Mirtha call me for work in his lab, i dont think good, so a say not, may be in 3 months, but i start my personal proyect so that was a lie. Later to sex months, they call me again, in this time we are talking about termns and conditions, for this moment my personal proyect not working like i think so I'm accept the work.
When I rejected work in a lab
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The first time to Mrs. Mirtha called me forto work in hiser lab, iI dont think goodidn't want to, so aI sayid not, may be in 3 months, but i. But I was starting my personal proyject so that was a lie.
(1) You're writing about something that happened in the past, so the past tense ("called", "didn't", "said", "was starting") is expected.
(2) The phrase is "call to (do something)".
(3) Since Mrs. Mirtha is female, it should be "her" and not "his".
(4) "I didn't think [it was] good" isn't something we really say in such a context. You can consider "I didn't want to".
(5) "Maybe" is one word.
(6) I split the sentence into two; I think it flows better this way, compared to being one long sentence.
Later to seSix months later, they called me again, in this time we awere talking about termns and conditions, for. At this moment my personal proyject was not working like i thinkas I thought (it would) so I'm accepted the work.
(1) The phrase is "X months later".
(2) Again, the past tense ("called", "thought", "accepted") is expected.
(3) We don't say "in this time". The phrase is just "this time".
(4) The phrase is "at this moment".
(5) Alternatively: "my personal project was not going as I thought it would" or "my personal project was not going as I'd imagined".
When I reject work in a lab When I rejected work in a lab |
The first time to Mrs. Mirtha call me for work in his lab, i dont think good, so a say not, may be in 3 months, but i start my personal proyect so that was a lie. The first time (1) You're writing about something that happened in the past, so the past tense ("called", "didn't", "said", "was starting") is expected. (2) The phrase is "call to (do something)". (3) Since Mrs. Mirtha is female, it should be "her" and not "his". (4) "I didn't think [it was] good" isn't something we really say in such a context. You can consider "I didn't want to". (5) "Maybe" is one word. (6) I split the sentence into two; I think it flows better this way, compared to being one long sentence. The first time |
Later to sex months, they call me again, in this time we are talking about termns and conditions, for this moment my personal proyect not working like i think so I'm accept the work.
(1) The phrase is "X months later". (2) Again, the past tense ("called", "thought", "accepted") is expected. (3) We don't say "in this time". The phrase is just "this time". (4) The phrase is "at this moment". (5) Alternatively: "my personal project was not going as I thought it would" or "my personal project was not going as I'd imagined".
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