Sept. 30, 2025
What's your guilty pleasure?
Eating late snack occasionally when I study English. Japanese snacks are all good and affordable, so they always are piled up in my shelf. Salty snacks and chocolate are very popular in Japan. I prefer salty one though. What kind of snacks are popular in your country?
Eating late snacks occasionally when I study English.
NOTE: The plural "snacks" is better here . . .
ALSO POSSIBLE: Japanese snacks are all good and affordable, sobut they always are piled up in my shelf.
Salty snacks and chocolates are very popular in Japan.
I prefer salty ones, though.
What kind of snacks are popular in your country?
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Have you tried Indian snacks? There are some absolutely yummy snacks in India that are somewhat hard to get in Japan.
This link might be of interest: https://www.indianhealthyrecipes.com/recipes/snacks/
Oct. 1, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
By writing with a simple sentence structure, I've become able to write a little more fluently.
I've never tried Indian snacks, and I have no idea what they are like. It seems like there are a variety of delicious snacks.
Eating late snacks occasionally when I study English.
Japanese snacks are all good and affordable, so they always are piled up ion my shelf.
Your shelf is an open place, so on.
Salty snacks and chocolate are very popular in Japan.
I prefer salty ones though.
You prefer many salty snacks so ones instead of one
What kind of snacks are popular in your country?
In my country, Poha is very much eaten. It varies if you are from North or South India. In the North, here, we like poha.
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Very minor mistakes which do not require that much attention; I recommend Grammarly for your help.
Oct. 1, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
By writing with a simple sentence structure, I've become able to write a little more fluently.
Sweet snacks are delicious, but I always crave salty snacks afterwards.
EOccasionally eating late snack occasionallys whenever I study English.
Japanese snacks are all good and affordable, so they are always are piled up in my shelf.
分かるーIt's the same thing for me!
I prefer salty ones though.
Oct. 1, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
By writing with a simple sentence structure, I've become able to write a little more fluently.
Sweet snacks are delicious, but I always crave salty snacks afterwards.
What's your guilty pleasure?
Eating a late snack occasionally when I study English.
Need an indefinite article before the noun
Japanese snacks are all good and affordable, so they always are piled up in my shelf.
Salty snacks and chocolate are very popular in Japan.
I prefer salty ones though.
Plural since you are referring to multiple (a type) of snacks (the salty ones)
What kind of snacks are popular in your country?
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Great work! America has a lot of very unhealthy snacks, I really like chips and ice cream. But I have been trying to eat a little healthier, so sometimes I will eat yogurt or smoothies!
Oct. 1, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I've started writing a little more fluently by using a simple sentence structure.
I have the impression that American snacks are brightly colored, but is that actually the case?
What's your guilty pleasure?
Eating late snack occasionallyMy guilty pleasure is occasionally eating late night snacks when I study English.
Japanese snacks are all good and affordable, so they always are piled up in my shelf.
Salty snacks and chocolate are very popular in Japan.
I prefer salty ones though.
What kind of snacks are popular in your country?
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Category:American_snack_foods
Sept. 30, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I've started writing a little more fluently by using a simple sentence structure.
I have the impression that American snacks are brightly colored, but is that actually the case?
What's your guilty pleasure?
Eating late-night snacks occasionally when I study English.
Japanese snacks are all good and affordable, so they are always are piled up ion my shelf.
I don't think what you wrote is wrong, but this order is much more natural.
Salty snacks and chocolate are very popular in Japan.
I prefer salty ones though.
What kind of snacks are popular in your country?
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I think people here like chewy, sugary snacks.
Sept. 30, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
By writing with a simple sentence structure, I've become able to write a little more fluently.
Sweet snacks are delicious, but I always crave salty snacks afterwards.
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I prefer salty one though. I prefer salty ones though. I prefer salty ones though. I prefer salty ones though. Plural since you are referring to multiple (a type) of snacks (the salty ones) I prefer salty ones though. I prefer salty ones though. You prefer many salty snacks so ones instead of one I prefer salty ones, though. |
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