June 10, 2025
What should i do?
Right now I'm listening some of spanish rock, those songs are my favorite ones when I'm feeling down.
In some days is the happy birthday of my ex girlfriend and I'm over thinking if I should write her or I should'nt. It is hard for me, really hard, I don't know what I must to do. I'm trying to do another activities to think clearly what I'm gonna do, but frecuently I feel so tired and I go to my bed, but at this point the thoughts starts in my head.
What should iI do?
Right now, I'm listening to some of sSpanish rock, t. Those songs are my favorite ones when I'm feeling down.
In somea few days ist will be the happy birthday of my ex girlfriend, and I'm over thinking ifwhether I should write to her or I should'not.
It is hard for me, really hard, and I don't know what I must to do.
I'm trying to do another activities to think clearly about what I'm gonna do, but frecuently I feel so tired often and I go to my bed, but at this point the thoughts (about it) starts in my head.
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She's your ex for a reason, right? No matter how hard it is, try your best to not think about her or consider having her back again, because there will always be better people. Best of luck man, stay strong, you'll make it through this
June 11, 2025
Thank you sir!!!
I'll be better and I'll improve my writing skills.
Have a great day.
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Just write to her as a friend. Don't overthink it. Just do it and forget about it.
June 11, 2025
Thank you a lot sir, I'll do it.
What should iI do?
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You are getting there. Feel free to reply with any questions. Good job and keep going!
June 11, 2025
It's clear, thanks for your contribution sir.
Have a great day.
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