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omikami

May 19, 2021

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What place in China would you like to visit?

我很想回武汉。五年没去武汉。我颇怀旧我小时候来的武汉去看家人-我记住那个城市有一个特别美丽的莲花池塘。汉街也有很多好吃的东西。我想再吃一次武汉的豆皮!希望下一次能用中文跟我家人对话-我还要继续练习。我也想再看武汉的博物馆和黄鹤楼。我记得李白写一首关于黄鹤楼的诗。


I want to go back to Wuhan. The last time I visited was 5 years ago. I'm really nostalgic about my childhood visits to see my family in Wuhan. I remember that this city has a particularly beautiful lotus pond. Han Street also has a lot of delicious food. I want to eat Wuhan's Doupi again! Hopefully I can use my Mandarin to talk with my family members- I need to keep practicing. I also want to see Wuhan's museum and Yellow Crane Tower. I remember that Li Bai wrote a poem about the Yellow Crane Tower.

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What place in China would you like to visit?

我很想回武汉。

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我已经五年没武汉

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怀旧,记得小时候来的我回武汉去看家人-我记住那个城市——那里有一个特别美丽的莲花池塘。

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街也有很多好吃的东西。

希望下一次能用中文跟我家人对话-交流——我还要继续练习。

我也想再看武汉的博物馆和黄鹤楼。

我记得李白写一首关于黄鹤楼的诗。

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故人西辞黄鹤楼,烟花三月下扬州。孤帆远影碧空尽,唯见长江天际流。——李白。

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Jack

May 19, 2021

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You home is Wuhan, why can’t you speak Chinese?

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omikami

May 20, 2021

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You home is Wuhan, why can’t you speak Chinese?

I don't know if you meant to come off this way, but this comment sounds really rude. I'm Chinese-American and I've lived most of my life in America. My Mandarin isn't native level, and that's pretty common for Chinese people who don't live in China

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masemune

May 20, 2021

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Please refrain these kinds of comments Jack. You need to remember that this is a language learning platform, so all comments and feedback needs to be constructive and helpful.

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Jack

May 21, 2021

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I don't know if you meant to come off this way, but this comment sounds really rude. I'm Chinese-American and I've lived most of my life in America. My Mandarin isn't native level, and that's pretty common for Chinese people who don't live in China

I just wondered, as a Chinese, why can’t you speak Chinese well? I didn’t mean any offense. I think it’s because of my bad English that I don’t know how to express it properly.

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Jack

May 21, 2021

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Please refrain these kinds of comments Jack. You need to remember that this is a language learning platform, so all comments and feedback needs to be constructive and helpful.

I just can't express it well in English. You saying this way makes me look like I did it on purpose.

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Jack

May 21, 2021

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I don't know if you meant to come off this way, but this comment sounds really rude. I'm Chinese-American and I've lived most of my life in America. My Mandarin isn't native level, and that's pretty common for Chinese people who don't live in China

Additionally, I don't know the detailed life situation of Chinese-Americans. And I don't even know the concept of Chinese-American.

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omikami

May 21, 2021

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I just wondered, as a Chinese, why can’t you speak Chinese well? I didn’t mean any offense. I think it’s because of my bad English that I don’t know how to express it properly.

I acknowledge your apology, but please stop saying that I cannot speak Mandarin well. I'm fully aware that my vocabulary is limited and that I make a lot of grammar mistakes. Generally, when people are writing/speaking in a foreign language, the last thing they want to hear is how "bad" they sound. (Trust me, some of them already feel really awkward and stressed.)

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Jack

May 21, 2021

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Please be confident and not to be so sensitive. Be a person who has a strong heart. For me, I never care that people don’t think I have good English because I know myself very well and I try my best all the time.

我很想回武汉。


我很想回武汉。

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五年没去武汉。


我已经五年没武汉

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What place in China would you like to visit?


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我颇怀旧我小时候来的武汉去看家人-我记住那个城市有一个特别美丽的莲花池塘。


怀旧,记得小时候来的我回武汉去看家人-我记住那个城市——那里有一个特别美丽的莲花池塘。

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汉街也有很多好吃的东西。


街也有很多好吃的东西。

我想再吃一次武汉的豆皮!


希望下一次能用中文跟我家人对话-我还要继续练习。


希望下一次能用中文跟我家人对话-交流——我还要继续练习。

我也想再看武汉的博物馆和黄鹤楼。


我也想再看武汉的博物馆和黄鹤楼。

我记得李白写一首关于黄鹤楼的诗。


我记得李白写一首关于黄鹤楼的诗。

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