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asahan2013

Oct. 4, 2025

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What makes China so Unique?

First of all, we can't deny its long history.
China's history extends back 5000 years.
China is one of the very few existing countries with an early civilization.
You know it falls into the same category as the Babylonians, Romans, Greeks, and Egyptians.
Secondly, China is a vast country.
As a matter of fact, it's the 3rd largest country in the world, right after Russia and Canada.
And it has a wide variety of landscapes, including forests, deserts, mountains, rivers and more.
So it has something for everyone.
In addition, China’s elevation is high in the west and low in the east, so the Yellow River and Yangtze River flow from west to east.


什麼讓中国如此独特?
首先,我們不能否認它的悠久歴史。中国有五千年的歴史。
中国是世界上少数幾個擁有早期文明的国家之一。
你知道,它属于古巴比倫人、古羅馬人、古希臘人和古埃及人的范畴。
其次,中国是个幅员辽阔的国家。事实上,它是世界上仅次于俄罗斯和加拿大的第三大国。
並且有多種多樣的風景包括森林,沙漠,山脈,河流等各種風景應有盡有。
還有,中國地勢西高東低,所以黃河長江都是自西向東流。

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What mMakes China so Unique?

China is one of the very few existing countries with an early civilizsation.

when you say few, very is implies, also British spelling but that is right for American English.

You know iIt falls into the same category as the Babylonians, Romans, Greeks, and Egyptians.

And iIt has a wide variety of landscapes, including forests, deserts, mountains, rivers and more.

Shouldn't start a sentence with a connector really

In addition, China’s elevation is high in the west and low in the east, so the Yellow River and Yangtze River flow from wWest to eEast.

the directions need capitalising

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Great job, only minor corrections and I've learned something from reading it. You've really got your own writing voice in English and it is engaging to read.

What makes China so Unique?


What mMakes China so Unique?

First of all, we can't deny its long history.


China's history extends back 5000 years.


China is one of the very few existing countries with an early civilization.


China is one of the very few existing countries with an early civilizsation.

when you say few, very is implies, also British spelling but that is right for American English.

Secondly, China is a vast country.


You know it falls into the same category as the Babylonians, Romans, Greeks, and Egyptians.


You know iIt falls into the same category as the Babylonians, Romans, Greeks, and Egyptians.

As a matter of fact, it's the 3rd largest country in the world, right after Russia and Canada.


And it has a wide variety of landscapes, including forests, deserts, mountains, rivers and more.


And iIt has a wide variety of landscapes, including forests, deserts, mountains, rivers and more.

Shouldn't start a sentence with a connector really

So it has something for everyone.


In addition, China’s elevation is high in the west and low in the east, so the Yellow River and Yangtze River flow from west to east.


In addition, China’s elevation is high in the west and low in the east, so the Yellow River and Yangtze River flow from wWest to eEast.

the directions need capitalising

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