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TOMO_o

Sept. 28, 2025

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What is your oldest clothing item in your closet?

I still wear a leather jacket that was given by my piano teacher when I was in high school. I have only some patterns I usually wear, so I'm going to go through my closet and throw my clothes they're too dirty. I haven't been that interested in fashion so far, but I think I should try to expand my fashion style.

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I still wear a leather jacket that was given by my piano teacher gave me when I was in high school.

I have only some patterns I usually wear, so I'm going to go through my closet and throw away my clothes they'at are too dirty.old.

In place of "old", we also say "ratty", "disheveled", or "worn out"

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TOMO_o

Sept. 29, 2025

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Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I still have a lot to study before I can immediately think of natural sentence structures.

What is your oldest clothing item in your closet?

I still wear a leather jacket that was given to me by my piano teacher when I was in high school.

Not necessary, but clearer. Can also write. "I still wear a leather jacket that my piano gave me in high school."

I have only some patterns I usually wear, so I'm going to go through my closet and throw my clothes they'at are too dirty.

I haven't been that interested in fashion so far, but I think I should try to expand my fashion style.

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TOMO_o

Sept. 29, 2025

27

Thank you very much for your careful corrections.

I still wear a leather jacket that was given to me by my piano teacher when I was in high school.

I have onlyonly have some patterns I usually wear, so I'm going to go through my closet and throw myout the clothes they'at are too dirty.

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TOMO_o

Sept. 28, 2025

27

Thank you very much for your careful corrections.

I still wear a leather jacket that was given to me by my piano teacher when I was in high school.

You can also consider shortening this to, "I still wear the leather jacket my piano teacher gave me in high school."

I have only someonly have a few patterns I usually wear, so I'm going to go through my closet and throw myout the clothes they'at are too dirty.

The correction above assumes that you're referring to patterns on clothes and not styles or outfits.

I haven't been that interested in fashion so far, but I think I should try to expandbroaden my fashion style.

This is good! For a more natural-sounding sentence, you can replace "expand" with "broaden." "Broaden" is the term conventionally used when talking about style.

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TOMO_o

Sept. 28, 2025

27

Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I still have a lot to study before I can immediately think of natural sentence structures.
But I do feel like I'm improving a little.

What is your oldest clothing item in your closet?


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I still wear a leather jacket that was given by my piano teacher when I was in high school.


I still wear a leather jacket that was given to me by my piano teacher when I was in high school.

You can also consider shortening this to, "I still wear the leather jacket my piano teacher gave me in high school."

I still wear a leather jacket that was given to me by my piano teacher when I was in high school.

I still wear a leather jacket that was given to me by my piano teacher when I was in high school.

Not necessary, but clearer. Can also write. "I still wear a leather jacket that my piano gave me in high school."

I still wear a leather jacket that was given by my piano teacher gave me when I was in high school.

I have only some patterns I usually wear, so I'm going to go through my closet and throw my clothes they're too dirty.


I have only someonly have a few patterns I usually wear, so I'm going to go through my closet and throw myout the clothes they'at are too dirty.

The correction above assumes that you're referring to patterns on clothes and not styles or outfits.

I have onlyonly have some patterns I usually wear, so I'm going to go through my closet and throw myout the clothes they'at are too dirty.

I have only some patterns I usually wear, so I'm going to go through my closet and throw my clothes they'at are too dirty.

I have only some patterns I usually wear, so I'm going to go through my closet and throw away my clothes they'at are too dirty.old.

In place of "old", we also say "ratty", "disheveled", or "worn out"

I haven't been that interested in fashion so far, but I think I should try to expand my fashion style.


I haven't been that interested in fashion so far, but I think I should try to expandbroaden my fashion style.

This is good! For a more natural-sounding sentence, you can replace "expand" with "broaden." "Broaden" is the term conventionally used when talking about style.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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