TOMO_o's avatar
TOMO_o

March 17, 2025

2
What is Your Life Dream?

My life dream is to become an artist. I have a lot of concepts that I want to paint and create in my head. Someday, I'm going to make them!

Corrections

What is Yyour Life Dreamdream life?

Much clearer.

My life dream is to become an artist.

I have a lot of concepts that I wantould like to paint and create in my head.

small correction.

Feedback

overall solid.

TOMO_o's avatar
TOMO_o

March 18, 2025

2

Thank you for the careful correction.

My life's dream is to become an artist.

I have a lot of conceptsideas in my head that I want to paint and create in my head.

Feedback

Go for it! :)

TOMO_o's avatar
TOMO_o

March 18, 2025

2

Thank you for the careful correction.

What is Your Life Dream?


What is Yyour Life Dreamdream life?

Much clearer.

My life dream is to become an artist.


My life's dream is to become an artist.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have a lot of concepts that I want to paint and create in my head.


I have a lot of conceptsideas in my head that I want to paint and create in my head.

I have a lot of concepts that I wantould like to paint and create in my head.

small correction.

Someday, I'm going to make them!


You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.

Go Premium