May 10, 2021
What is Happiness
There are people who have a happy family, health, money but are unhappy nonetheless. On the other hand, there are people who do not have any of the above and are happy… We wonder if it is necessary to have everything in life for a person to be happy. People panic in search of happiness and become increasingly unhappy.
I think that happiness is originally born in a person's heart… When I wake up in the morning, I am happy because a new day has just begun. On the way to school, I pass a kindergarten from which cheerful childrens' cries and cheerful laughter come. Here are the reasons for happiness! A classmate waits for me around the corner, we both look at our watches. Ugh, we are late for school. We run together as fast as we can. We arrive at the last minute and laugh about everything. We manage to arrive in time, we are happy. Finally, the teacher enters the classroom, she brings corrected tests. I get an A. I am happy!
Happiness is when you hear the cheerful chirping of birds, you see a beautiful flower in the neighbor's garden, the smell of cut grass reaches you, you rejoice because the sun enters the twilight and creates a scene to be remembered.
The happiness of a parent is each to their children, the happiness of a child is his parents, happiness is to receive a smile, happiness is to give someone a smile. Happiness is one big, beautiful, vicious circle.
If you ask me, happiness is in the heart of every man, insight, in touch, in a nice word, in good deeds… And to go back to the beginning. Indeed, some things that happen in one's life can not be influenced by oneself, but one can. She can understand that happiness is in the little things. It is just a matter of whether she will let it find him.
What is Happiness?
There are people who have a happy family, health, and money but are unhappy nonetheless.
On the other hand, there are people who do not have any of the above and are happy… We wonder if it i. This calls into question whether it's necessary to have everything in life for a person to be happy.
People panic in search ofworry so much about finding happiness andthat they become increasingly unhappy.
What you wrote is correct, but this version seems a bit clearer to me (just my personal take).
I think that happiness is originally born in a person's heart…. When I wake up in the morning, I am happy because a new day has just begun.
On the way to school, I pass a kindergarten from which cheerful childrens' cries and cheerful laughter come.
Deleted "cheerful" to avoid redundancy.
Here are the reasons for happiness!
A classmate waits for me around the corner, and we both look at our watches.
Ugh, we are late for school.
We run together as fast as we can.
We arrive at the last minute and laugh about everything.
We manage to arrive in time, so we are happy.
Finally, the teacher enters the classroom, she bringsing corrected tests.
I get an A. I am happy!
Happiness is when you hear the cheerful chirping of birds, you see a beautiful flower in the neighbor's garden, the smell of cut grass reaches you, you rejoice because the sun enters the twilight and creates a scene to be remembered.
This is so poetic - love it :)
The happiness of a parent is each to their children, the happiness of a child isA parent finds happiness in their children, while a child finds happiness in his parents, h. Happiness is to receiveing a smile, h. Happiness is to givegiving someone a smile.
Using the gerund (present participle) sounds a bit more natural in the last two sentences.
Happiness is one big, beautiful, vicirtuous cirycle.
Vicious cycle = BAD cycle, very negative connotations
Virtuous cycle = good - positive connotations
If you ask me, happiness is in the heart of every man, insight, in touch, in a nice word, and in good deeds… And to go back to the beginning.
Not sure what the second sentence means?
Indeed, some one cannot influence everythings that happens in one's life can not be influenced by oneself, but one canlife, but some things are within our control.
"within our control" is a good collocation here
She can understand that happiness is in the little things.
Unclear who "she" is?
It is just a matter of whether she will let it find him.
Again, not sure what you mean by "she" and "him."
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May 10, 2021
On the other hand, there are people who do not have any of the above and are happy… We wonder if it i. This calls into question whether it's necessary to have everything in life for a person to be happy.
Is it OK to write: Is it necessary to have everything in life for a person to be happy?
May 10, 2021
She can understand that happiness is in the little things.
A person.
May 10, 2021
Is it OK to write: Is it necessary to have everything in life for a person to be happy?
Yes, that works!
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Here are the reasons for happiness! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There are people who have a happy family, health, money but are unhappy nonetheless. There are people who have a happy family, health, and money but are unhappy nonetheless. |
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On the other hand, there are people who do not have any of the above and are happy… We wonder if it is necessary to have everything in life for a person to be happy. On the other hand, there are people who do not have any of the above and are happy |
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People panic in search of happiness and become increasingly unhappy. People What you wrote is correct, but this version seems a bit clearer to me (just my personal take). |
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I think that happiness is originally born in a person's heart… When I wake up in the morning, I am happy because a new day has just begun. I think that happiness is originally born in a person's heart |
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On the way to school, I pass a kindergarten from which cheerful childrens' cries and cheerful laughter come. On the way to school, I pass a kindergarten from which cheerful childrens' cries and Deleted "cheerful" to avoid redundancy. |
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A classmate waits for me around the corner, we both look at our watches. A classmate waits for me around the corner, and we both look at our watches. |
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Ugh, we are late for school. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We run together as fast as we can. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We arrive at the last minute and laugh about everything. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We manage to arrive in time, we are happy. We manage to arrive in time, so we are happy. |
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Finally, the teacher enters the classroom, she brings corrected tests. Finally, the teacher enters the classroom |
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I get an A. I am happy! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Happiness is when you hear the cheerful chirping of birds, you see a beautiful flower in the neighbor's garden, the smell of cut grass reaches you, you rejoice because the sun enters the twilight and creates a scene to be remembered. Happiness is when you hear the cheerful chirping of birds, you see a beautiful flower in the neighbor's garden, the smell of cut grass reaches you, you rejoice because the sun enters the twilight and creates a scene to be remembered. This is so poetic - love it :) |
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The happiness of a parent is each to their children, the happiness of a child is his parents, happiness is to receive a smile, happiness is to give someone a smile.
Using the gerund (present participle) sounds a bit more natural in the last two sentences. |
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Happiness is one big, beautiful, vicious circle. Happiness is one big, beautiful, vi Vicious cycle = BAD cycle, very negative connotations Virtuous cycle = good - positive connotations |
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If you ask me, happiness is in the heart of every man, insight, in touch, in a nice word, in good deeds… And to go back to the beginning. If you ask me, happiness is in the heart of every man, insight, in touch, in a nice word, and in good deeds Not sure what the second sentence means? |
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Indeed, some things that happen in one's life can not be influenced by oneself, but one can. Indeed, "within our control" is a good collocation here |
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She can understand that happiness is in the little things. She can understand that happiness is in the little things. Unclear who "she" is? |
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It is just a matter of whether she will let it find him. It is just a matter of whether she will let it find him. Again, not sure what you mean by "she" and "him." |
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