June 4, 2025
What if Your Biggest Fear Materialized?
People have different kinds of fears and flaws which they try to conceal from others or are hidden in their subconscious: failures, rejections, insecurities, addictions, emotional scars... and the list goes on. Due to these cracks in ourselves, we afraid that people would perceive us negatively, and that fear only amplifies the inner turmoil going on inside us. We try to avoid facing our own vulnerabilities and pretend we are fine. But deep down, we are not fine. We were just stuck inside a bubble boundary created by ourselves.
I also have a fear that most people around me don't know. They perceive me as a well-behaved person, an obedient daughter, and a studious student. These are good traits that I manifested in myself, just because I dislike criticism. During my childhood, I had unknowingly developed a sensitivity to criticism. I hated to be scolded and judged, and I avoided those nightmarish cases as much as possible. I often put on a cold expression because I want to conceal my susceptibility; I want people to think I am insensitive and confident.
How long can I wear this mask? Perhaps, people may discover it in the near future—that I am not that perfect person that they have always seen in me.
What if Your Biggest Fear Materialized?
People have different kinds of fears and flaws which they try to conceal from others or are hidden in their subconscious: failures, rejections, insecurities, addictions, emotional scars... and the list goes on.
Due to these cracks in ourselves, we are afraid that people would perceive us negatively and that fear only amplifies the inner turmoil going on inside us.
We try to avoid facing our own vulnerabilities and pretend we are fine.
But deep down, we are not fine.
We weare just stuck inside a bubble boundary created by ourselves.
(1) "Are" would be more natural than "were", to keep the tense consistent with all your previous sentences.
(2) "Bubble boundary" might sound a little weird. Just "bubble" is fine.
I also have a fear that most people around me don't know.
They perceive me as a well-behaved person, an obedient daughter and a studious student.
"Studious student" is not wrong by any means, but might sound a little funny, due to the repetition of the "stu-" sound. When writing, I'd personally opt for a different phrase, like "diligent student".
During my childhood, I had, unknowingly, developed a sensitivity to criticisms.
I hated to be scolded and judged, and I avoided those nightmarish cases as much as possible.
I often put on a cold expression because I want to conceal my susceptibility; I want people to think I am insensitivethick-skinned and confident.
insensitive: showing or feeling no concern for others' feelings. This word has a fairly negative connotation when used alone (rather than in context, such as in the phrase "insensitive to criticisms"), unless that's precisely what you wanted to convey. If not, you can consider "thick-skinned" instead.
How long can I put on this mask?
Perhaps, people may discover it in the near future—that I am not that perfect person that they have always seen in me.
What if Your Biggest Fear Materialized?
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How long can I put on this mask? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Perhaps, people may discover it in the near future—that I am not that perfect person that they have always seen in me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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People have different kinds of fears and flaws which they try to conceal from others or are hidden in their subconscious: failures, rejections, insecurities, addictions, emotional scars... and the list goes on. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Due to these cracks in ourselves, we afraid that people would perceive us negatively and that fear only amplifies the inner turmoil going on inside us. Due to these cracks in ourselves, we are afraid that people w the end was redundant and i fixed some grammar. Due to these cracks in ourselves, we are afraid that people would perceive us negatively and that fear only amplifies the inner turmoil going on inside us. |
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We try to avoid facing our own vulnerabilities and pretend we are fine. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But deep down, we are not fine. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We were just stuck inside a bubble boundary created by ourselves. We (1) "Are" would be more natural than "were", to keep the tense consistent with all your previous sentences. (2) "Bubble boundary" might sound a little weird. Just "bubble" is fine. |
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I also have a fear that most people around me don't know. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They perceive me as a well-behave person, an obedient daughter and a studious student. They perceive me as a well-behaved person, an obedient daughter and a studious student. "Studious student" is not wrong by any means, but might sound a little funny, due to the repetition of the "stu-" sound. When writing, I'd personally opt for a different phrase, like "diligent student". |
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These are good traits that I manifested in myself—just because I dislike criticisms. |
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During my childhood, I had, unknowingly, developed a sensitivity to criticisms. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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What if Your Biggest Fear Materialized? What if Your Biggest Fear Materialized? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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What if Your biggest Fear materialized? |
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I hated to be scolded and judged, and I avoided those nightmarish cases as much as possible. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I often put on a cold expression because I want to conceal my susceptibility; I want people to think I am insensitive and confident. I often put on a cold expression because I want to conceal my susceptibility; I want people to think I am insensitive: showing or feeling no concern for others' feelings. This word has a fairly negative connotation when used alone (rather than in context, such as in the phrase "insensitive to criticisms"), unless that's precisely what you wanted to convey. If not, you can consider "thick-skinned" instead. |
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They perceive me as a well-behaved person, an obedient daughter, and a studious student. |
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These are good traits that I manifested in myself, just because I dislike criticism. |
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During my childhood, I had, unknowingly, developed a sensitivity to criticism. |
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How long can I wear this mask? |
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Due to these cracks in ourselves, we afraid that people would perceive us negatively, and that fear only amplifies the inner turmoil going on inside us. |
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During my childhood, I had unknowingly developed a sensitivity to criticism. |
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