Jan. 12, 2025
What I love of being alive
I have found this question and I've felt butterflies in my gut.
Nowadays, I love this world, my country, my city, my loved ones... but a few months ago I couldn't say the same - I was in a deppresion.
Thinking about it, this world have a huge amount of beautiful people and animals (I admit it, I love animals -especially my dogs- more than many humans ). Furthermore, I really enjoy the nature, the mountains, the beaches, the green areas in my country, seeing the rain and the sun... I also love travel around the world and discover new places and their people - and in my experience, most of them are kindly, wonderful ones.
Therefore, if you ask me today, probably I would tell you that being alive is an amazing present, and we should delight in the wonders of creation. There is always a way, there is always a salvation.
(It seems like I'm turning this app in my gratitude journal, right? hahaha)
What I love ofabout being alive
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Thinking more about it, this world haves a huge amount of beautiful people and animals (I'll admit it, I love animals -- especially my dogs -- more than many humans ).
Furthermore, I really enjoy the nature, the mountains, the beaches, the green areasery in my country, and seeing the rain and the sun...
I also love travel around the world and discover new places and their people -- and in my experience, most of them are kindly, wonderful ones.
There is always a way, t. There is always a salvation.
(It seems like I'm turning this app into my gratitude journal, right?
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Really great introspection and English! The two things I'd watch out for are dashes and lists separated by commas which are three or longer. If you want to use the dash to separate ideas, it should be two hyphens long. Hyphens, the short dash, are only used to joins words to create a compound word (over-exposed, Japanese-American). It can't be used as a pause in a sentence. When making a list with commas that is three or longer, the last phrase should have an and before it. Otherwise, really great work!
Jan. 14, 2025
Thank you for your time and your explanation, I'm so grateful! :D
I also love to travel around the world and discover new places and learn about their people - and in my experience, most of them are kindly, wonderful ones.
Jan. 12, 2025
Thank you!
What I love ofabout being alive
I have found this question and I've felt butterflies in my gut.
Nowadays, I love this world, my country, my city, my loved ones... but a few months ago I couldn't say the same - I was in a deppression.
Thinking about it, this world have a huge amount ofs many beautiful people and animals (I admit it, I love animals; -especially my dogs-, more than many humans ).
Furthermore, I really enjoy the nature, the mountains, the beaches, the green areas in my country, seeexperiencing the rain and the sun...
I also love to travel around the world and discover new places and their people - and in my experience, most of them are kindly, and wonderful ones.
Therefore, if you ask me today, probably I would tell you that being alive is an amazing present, and we should delight in the wonders of creation.
There is always a way, there is always a salvation.
(It seems like I'm turning this app in my gratitude journal, right?
Haha yes, here for it
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Good job, and glad you got through your depression.
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