April 2, 2021
What I like to do
My hobbies are basic but I love them. Some people could write about their passion for climbing mountains, riding motorbikes, or any activities involving adrenaline. But I don't. What do I like to do?
- Reading books
- Writing (in Spanish)
- Watching Netflix
- doing some exercise
- playing videogames
I'm kind of average but I'm happy. Besides, my not-so-exciting hobbies are easy to practice even in pandemic times, so I've not stopped enjoying them.
My favorite book is The Lord of the Rings, but I also like reading all kinds of books. Although I usually have a better time reading fantasy than other genres. The last book I really enjoyed was "Kings of the Wyld" by Nicholas Eames and the last book I've read it is "Star Wars Lost Stars" by Claudia Gray (also cool). I would recommend both of them to you.
What I like to do
My hobbies are basic but I love them.
Some people could write about their passion for climbing mountains, riding motorbikes, or any activities involving adrenaline.
But I don't.
What do I like to do?
- Reading books
- Writing (in Spanish)
- Watching Netflix
- doing some exercise
- playing videogames
I'm kind of average but I'm happy.
Besides, my not-so-exciting hobbies are easy to practice even in pandemic times, so I've not stopped enjoying them.
Although I usually have a better time reading fantasy than other genres.
I would recommend both of them to you.
I recommend them both.
Feedback
What I corrected wasn't technically incorrect or unnatural but I think it would be better to say "I recommend them both." in this context.
April 3, 2021
Thanks! I appreciate the feedback:)
What I like to do
My hobbies are basic but I love them.
Some people could write about their passion for climbing mountains, riding motorbikes, or any activities involving adrenaline.
But I don't.
- Reading books
Your version is not incorrect, but it does not match up with the previous sentence "What do I like to do?" If you change that to "What do I like?" then "Reading books" reads correctly.
- Writinge (in Spanish)
Same comments here.
- Watching Netflix
Same comments here.
- doing some eExercise
"Exercise" is both a noun and a verb, so you can use it as a verb in place of "doing some"
- playing videogames
Same comments in terms of agreement with the lead-in sentence.
I'm kind of average but I'm happy.
Besides, my not-so-exciting hobbies are easy to practice even in pandemic times, so I've not stopped enjoying them.
My favorite book is The Lord of the Rings, but I also like reading all kinds of books.
Although I usually have a better time reading fantasy than other genres.
The last book I really enjoyed was "Kings of the Wyld" by Nicholas Eames, and the last book I've read it is "Star Wars Lost Stars" by Claudia Gray (also cool).
I would recommend both of them to you.
Feedback
Overall this is a great job! There are only a few minor errors.
April 3, 2021
Thank you! I really appreciate it:)
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- Watching Netflix - Watch Same comments here. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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- doing some exercise - "Exercise" is both a noun and a verb, so you can use it as a verb in place of "doing some" This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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- playing videogames - play Same comments in terms of agreement with the lead-in sentence. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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What I like to do This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My hobbies are basic but I love them. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Some people could write about their passion for climbing mountains, riding motorbikes, or any activities involving adrenaline. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But I don't. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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- Reading books - Read Your version is not incorrect, but it does not match up with the previous sentence "What do I like to do?" If you change that to "What do I like?" then "Reading books" reads correctly. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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- Writing (in Spanish) - Writ Same comments here. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I'm kind of average but I'm happy. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Besides, my not-so-exciting hobbies are easy to practice even in pandemic times, so I've not stopped enjoying them. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My favorite book is The Lord of the Rings, but I also like reading all kinds of books. My favorite book is The Lord of the Rings, but I |
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Although I usually have a better time reading fantasy than other genres. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The last book I really enjoyed was "Kings of the Wyld" by Nicholas Eames and the last book I've read it is "Star Wars Lost Stars" by Claudia Gray (also cool). The last book I really enjoyed was "Kings of the Wyld" by Nicholas Eames, and the last book I've read |
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I would recommend both of them to you. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I would recommend both of them to you. I recommend them both. |
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