Sept. 20, 2025
What good deeds have you done recently?
I give up my seat on the train to elderly people. However, I usually sleep on the train because I've been exhausted lately, so I often miss them. I've been thinking lately that we need peace of mind firstly in order to have a kindness for other people.
What good deeds have you done recently?
I give up my seat on the train to elderly people.
However, I usually sleep on the train because I've been exhausted lately, so. As a result, I often miss them.
I've been thinking lately that we need peace of mind firstly in order to have a kindness forbe kind to other people.
Sept. 20, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I'll need to practice more.
Sept. 21, 2025
You're welcome.
What good deeds have you done recently?
I giave up my seat on the train to elderly people.
"Recently" (in the title) refers to the past, so the past tense is expected here.
However, I usually sleep on the train because I've been exhausted lately, so I often miss them.
I've been thinking lately that we first need peace of mind firstly in order to have athe kindness for other people.
(1) "First" is more appropriate here; "firstly" is generally used to introduce a point you want to make. Also, "we need peace of mind first" is okay, but I think it's more natural-sounding to shift "first" in front.
(2) "The kindness" might be more natural than "a kindness" here, because you're referring to a specific "kindness"—that for other people.
(3) Instead of "other people", you can also use "others". I might prefer "others" here, because you'd already ended your first sentence on "people" not too long ago.
Sept. 20, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I still have difficulty with the appropriate placement of words and when to use "a" and "the".
I'll need to practice more.
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I give up my seat on the train to elderly people. I g "Recently" (in the title) refers to the past, so the past tense is expected here. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, I usually sleep on the train because I've been exhausted lately, so I often miss them. This sentence has been marked as perfect! However, I usually sleep on the train because I've been exhausted lately |
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