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Dasir

Dec. 4, 2023

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What do you think about the sun?

Do you think about the sun anytime? I didn't. I recived it like a obligation or something regular. Most of people didn't think too. Why? The sun is very important piece of us. Of course, the sun is important part of our solar sistem, but I want to tell about our life. If you imaged than the sun is dissapear, what would be with us? We will die. Most of all дiving creatures will die. Ok. I'm sorry. I don't want to make you scared. So, forget what I told. Imagine, if you isolate someone from the sun, how change his life? First, circadian rhythem will be upset. Then, he will feel bad himself, because he won't recive some things from the sun. After that, his psychological condition will become worse, than early. And he will go crazy in the end and die. Thanks for reading.

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Do you ever think about the sun anytime?

I didn't (until recently).

Do you think about the sun now? If so, say this. If not, say "I don't."

I just received its like aght, thinking that it shines out of obligation or something regusimilar.

This is the best way I can think to rewrite this while using your words.

I would change it to "I took its light for granted, as just a part of nature." or something similar.

Most of people didn't thinkthink (the same / this way too).

Why?

The sun is a very important piece of usour life.

Of course, the sun is an important part of our solar siystem too, but I want to tellalk about our lifeves.

If you imagedmagine thant the sun is dissappear,ed: what would be withhappen to us?

or "what would become of us?"

We willould die.

Most of all дliving creatures willould die.

Ok.,

I'm sorry.

I don't want to make you scared.

So, forget what I toldjust told you.

Imagine, ifnstead that you isolated someone from the sun,: how would this change his life?

or "how would his life change?"

First, his circadian rhythem willould be upset.

Then, he willould feel bad himself, because he wocan't receive some things(anything / light) from the sun.

After that, his psychological condition willould become worse, than earquickly.

And he will go crazy in the end and die.

Thanks for reading.

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Have you heard of "The Sun Vanished"? It is an alternate reality story that was told on Twitter. I think you would like it ;) https://twitter.com/TheSunVanished https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fahujLokim4&ab_channel=InsideAMind

What do you think about the sun?

DoHave you think about the sun anytimeever thought about it?

I didn'thadn’t, until recently.

I recived it like a obligation or something regulartook it for granted, like a mundane obligation.

Most of people didn't think too.probably do the same. But why?

The sun is very important piece of usa vital part of our existence.

Of course, the sun is importantit's an essential part of our solar siystem, but I want to tellalk about its impact on our lifeves.

If you imaged thanmagine if the sun is dissappear,ed -- what would be withhappen to us?

We willould die.

MAlmost of all дliving creatures will dieould perish.

I used perish here to change it up a little bit since we used "die" in the previous sentence

Ok.

I'm sorry.

I don't want to make you scared.

So, forget what I tolsaid.

Imagine, how someone's life would change if you isolate someoned them from the sun, how change his life?.

First, their circadian rhythem will be upsetould be disrupted.

Then, they will feel bad himself,ould begin to feel unwell because they wouldn't receive some thingvital elements from the sun.

After that, his psychological condition will become worse, than early.Gradually, their psychological health would deteriorate, potentially leading to severe mental distress and, ultimately, death

Thanks for reading.

What do you think about the sun?


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Do you think about the sun anytime?


DoHave you think about the sun anytimeever thought about it?

Do you ever think about the sun anytime?

I didn't.


I didn'thadn’t, until recently.

I didn't (until recently).

Do you think about the sun now? If so, say this. If not, say "I don't."

I recived it like a obligation or something regular.


I recived it like a obligation or something regulartook it for granted, like a mundane obligation.

I just received its like aght, thinking that it shines out of obligation or something regusimilar.

This is the best way I can think to rewrite this while using your words. I would change it to "I took its light for granted, as just a part of nature." or something similar.

Most of people didn't think too.


Most of people didn't think too.probably do the same. But why?

Most of people didn't thinkthink (the same / this way too).

Why?


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The sun is very important piece of us.


The sun is very important piece of usa vital part of our existence.

The sun is a very important piece of usour life.

Of course, the sun is important part of our solar sistem, but I want to tell about our life.


Of course, the sun is importantit's an essential part of our solar siystem, but I want to tellalk about its impact on our lifeves.

Of course, the sun is an important part of our solar siystem too, but I want to tellalk about our lifeves.

If you imaged than the sun is dissapear, what would be with us?


If you imaged thanmagine if the sun is dissappear,ed -- what would be withhappen to us?

If you imagedmagine thant the sun is dissappear,ed: what would be withhappen to us?

or "what would become of us?"

We will die.


We willould die.

We willould die.

Most of all дiving creatures will die.


MAlmost of all дliving creatures will dieould perish.

I used perish here to change it up a little bit since we used "die" in the previous sentence

Most of all дliving creatures willould die.

Ok.


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Ok.,

I'm sorry.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I don't want to make you scared.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

So, forget what I told.


So, forget what I tolsaid.

So, forget what I toldjust told you.

Imagine, if you isolate someone from the sun, how change his life?


Imagine, how someone's life would change if you isolate someoned them from the sun, how change his life?.

Imagine, ifnstead that you isolated someone from the sun,: how would this change his life?

or "how would his life change?"

First, circadian rhythem will be upset.


First, their circadian rhythem will be upsetould be disrupted.

First, his circadian rhythem willould be upset.

Then, he will feel bad himself, because he won't recive some things from the sun.


Then, they will feel bad himself,ould begin to feel unwell because they wouldn't receive some thingvital elements from the sun.

Then, he willould feel bad himself, because he wocan't receive some things(anything / light) from the sun.

After that, his psychological condition will become worse, than early.


After that, his psychological condition will become worse, than early.Gradually, their psychological health would deteriorate, potentially leading to severe mental distress and, ultimately, death

After that, his psychological condition willould become worse, than earquickly.

And he will go crazy in the end and die.


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Thanks for reading.


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