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TOMO_o

Jan. 30, 2025

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What do you do when you're feelin down?

When I'm feeling down, I watch comedy show on TV or PC. Laughing is very important to be positive and makes surrounding people happy too.

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What do you do when you're feeling down?

When I'm feeling down, I watch comedy shows on TV or on my PC.

You could also just say "I watch comedies on TV"

Laughing is very important to befor staying positive and makes surrounding peoplepeople around you happy too.

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Well done, and good advice :-)

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TOMO_o

Jan. 31, 2025

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Thank you for the careful correction.

What do you do when you're feelin down?

Feeling instead of "feelin"

When I'm feeling down, I watch comedy show on TV or PC.

Although "PC" is correct, we usually say "computer" or "laptop". Just like the phrase "on TV" is used, its more natural to add "on my PC"

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TOMO_o

Jan. 31, 2025

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Thank you for the careful correction.

When I'm feeling down, I watch comedy show on TV or PC.


When I'm feeling down, I watch comedy show on TV or PC.

Although "PC" is correct, we usually say "computer" or "laptop". Just like the phrase "on TV" is used, its more natural to add "on my PC"

When I'm feeling down, I watch comedy shows on TV or on my PC.

You could also just say "I watch comedies on TV"

Laughing is very important to be positive and makes surrounding people happy too.


Laughing is very important to befor staying positive and makes surrounding peoplepeople around you happy too.

What do you do when you're feelin down?


What do you do when you're feelin down?

Feeling instead of "feelin"

What do you do when you're feeling down?

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