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Solen

Sept. 29, 2025

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What can we learn from toddlers ?

Today, I listened a 6 minutes english transmissions. It was a discussion between 2 people talking about a trending subject. Today, it was about the toddlers, child aged from 2 to 4. It' a very important stage of life because you learn to speak and walk and you also discover the world. When you are a toddler, you are totaly depending on your parents, they clothe you, feed you, etc. So we can wonder "What can we learn about them". A doctor speaking in an emission who has a toddler said that sometimes, she talk out loud. But the most interesting is that she self talked. She said "You can do that Julie" speking to herself. But when you're growing up, your self talk became more negative, it says you can't do that or you're no good. So, the doctor says an advice we all can do easily, we have to self talk like we could talk to our best friend. We have to be kind and positive with ourselfs. Thanks for reading !

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Today, I listened a 6 minutes e long English transmissions.

transmission is an unusual word these days - we're much more likely to say the exact type, like "podcast", "radio show", "video", etc.

It was a discussion between 2 people talking about a trending subject.

Today, it was about the toddlers, child aged from 2 to 4who are children between 2 to 4 years old.

It' a very important stage of life because you learn to speak and walk and you also discover the world.

When you are a toddler, you are totally dependingent on your parents,: they clothe you, feed you, etc.

So we can wonder, "What can we learn aboutfrom them".?

A doctor speaking in an emissionon the show who has a toddler said that sometimes, she talks out loud.

But the most interesting is that she self talkeds.

She said, "You can do that Julie" while speaking to herself.

But whenas you're growing up, your self talk becames more negative,; it says you can't do that or you're no good.

So, the doctor says angave some advice we all can do easily,: we have to self talk like we cwould talk to our best friend.

We have to be kind and positive with ourselfves.

Thanks for reading !

Today, I listened to a 6 -minutes e English transmissions.

Between two related terms, a dash should come. English is capitalized and no s in transmission if you listened to only one

It was a discussion between 2 people talking about a trending subject.

Today, it was about the toddlers, children aged from 2 to 4.

Two children are there so children

It's a very important stage of life because you learn to speak and, walk and you also discover the world.

'And' comes only before the last object is more than two of them are listed.

A doctor speaking in an emission who has a toddler said that sometimes, she talks out loud.

'She' is singular so s will come after the verb.

She said, "You can do that Julie" speaking to herself.

Before dialogue, comma should come. Spelling error in speaking

But when you're growing up, your self talk became more negative, it says you can't do that or you're no good.

So, the doctor says an advice we all cangives advice that we can all do easily,; we have to self -talk like we cwould talk to our best friend.

It is only "advice" because advice is uncountable. Between self and talk there should be a dash

We have to be kind and positive with ourselfs.ves

Not selfs, selves.

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Your English is overall great; you're discussing a niche topic, which is great for a B1 level. But your corrections are mostly not adding dashes, messing with plurals, or making spelling mistakes. I suggest you use Grammarly to improve spelling and help form grammatically correct spellings.

Solen's avatar
Solen

Sept. 30, 2025

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Thanks a lot. I wrote in a computeur so I think sometimes I added dashes but I didn't want.

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doechiisclass

Sept. 30, 2025

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I know right? The computer is my only option because opening a website on a phone which is not an app seems janky and messy.

What cCan wWe lLearn fFrom tToddlers ?

Titles have special capitalization rules. Also, no spaces before question or exclamation marks in English

Today, I listened to a 6 minutes e English transmissions.

You will always have "to" after "listen." English is always capitalized (true for any language or nationality).

"Transmission" is hardly used; this would more naturally be called a video or audio clip, depending on what it was

It was a discussion between 2 people talking about a trending subject.

Today, it was about the toddlers, children aged from 2 to 4.

Speaking about toddlers in general => no need for "the"

It's a very important stage of life because you learn to speak and walk and you also discover the world.

When you are a toddler, you are totally dependingent on your parents, - they clothe you, feed you, etc.

Depending = verb form
Dependent = adjective or noun, describes a state of reliance.

So we can wonderask ourselves, "What can we learn about them?".

Since what you are wondering here is slated as a question, it'd be more natural to use "ask ourselves"

A doctor speaking in anone empissionode/clip/podcast/video who has a toddler herself said that sometimes, she talks out loud.

Like "transmission," we wouldn't use "emission," but something specific according to the type of content it was.

I would add "herself" as a small emphasis

But the most interesting thing/part is that she self talked to herself.

Interesting is an adjective, it needs to be describing something

She said, "You can do that Julie," speaking to herself.

I'd expect this to be "you can do it" as a general motivator which can be about anything. If you use "that," then it is specifically about something that has already been mentioned (which is a context that we don't see here in reading your post)

But when you're growing up, your self -talk becaomes more negative, it sayssaying you can't do that or that you're no good.

So, the doctor says an advice we all canadvises doing something we can all do easily, - we have to self talktalk to ourselves like we cwould talk to our best friend.

Advice isn't quantitative. To make it quantitative, you could say "piece of advice," but I would just use the verb here

We have to be kind and positive with ourselfves.

Thanks for reading !

No space

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Great job.

Today, I listened to a 6 minutes e English transmissions.

It was a discussion between 2 people talking about a trending subject.

Today, it was about the toddlers, children aged from 2 to 4.

It's a very important stage of life because you learn to speak and walk and you also discover the world.

When you are a toddler, you are totally dependingent on your parents, theyo clothe you, feed you, etc.

So we can wonder "What can we learn aboutfrom them".

I think you meant "from" based on your title.

A doctor speaking in an emithe discussion who has a toddler said that sometimes, she talks out loud.

I'm not sure what you meant by "emission" here.

But tThe most interesting part is that she self talked to herself.

She said, "You can do that Julie", speaking to herself.

ButHowever, when you're growing up, your self talk becaomes more negative, it sayssaying you can't do that or you're no good.

So, the doctor says ansome advice we all can dofollow easily, is that we have to self talktalk to ourselves like we cwould talk to our best friend.

We have to be kind and positive with ourselfves.

Thanks for reading !

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Good work! I agree with the doctor!

When you are a toddler, you are totaly depending on your parents, they clothe you, feed you, etc.


When you are a toddler, you are totally dependingent on your parents, theyo clothe you, feed you, etc.

When you are a toddler, you are totally dependingent on your parents, - they clothe you, feed you, etc.

Depending = verb form Dependent = adjective or noun, describes a state of reliance.

When you are a toddler, you are totally dependingent on your parents,: they clothe you, feed you, etc.

So we can wonder "What can we learn about them".


So we can wonder "What can we learn aboutfrom them".

I think you meant "from" based on your title.

So we can wonderask ourselves, "What can we learn about them?".

Since what you are wondering here is slated as a question, it'd be more natural to use "ask ourselves"

So we can wonder, "What can we learn aboutfrom them".?

What can we learn from toddlers ?


What cCan wWe lLearn fFrom tToddlers ?

Titles have special capitalization rules. Also, no spaces before question or exclamation marks in English

Today, I listened a 6 minutes english transmissions.


Today, I listened to a 6 minutes e English transmissions.

Today, I listened to a 6 minutes e English transmissions.

You will always have "to" after "listen." English is always capitalized (true for any language or nationality). "Transmission" is hardly used; this would more naturally be called a video or audio clip, depending on what it was

Today, I listened to a 6 -minutes e English transmissions.

Between two related terms, a dash should come. English is capitalized and no s in transmission if you listened to only one

Today, I listened a 6 minutes e long English transmissions.

transmission is an unusual word these days - we're much more likely to say the exact type, like "podcast", "radio show", "video", etc.

It was a discussion between 2 people talking about a trending subject.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today, it was about the toddlers, child aged from 2 to 4.


Today, it was about the toddlers, children aged from 2 to 4.

Today, it was about the toddlers, children aged from 2 to 4.

Speaking about toddlers in general => no need for "the"

Today, it was about the toddlers, children aged from 2 to 4.

Two children are there so children

Today, it was about the toddlers, child aged from 2 to 4who are children between 2 to 4 years old.

It' a very important stage of life because you learn to speak and walk and you also discover the world.


It's a very important stage of life because you learn to speak and walk and you also discover the world.

It's a very important stage of life because you learn to speak and walk and you also discover the world.

It's a very important stage of life because you learn to speak and, walk and you also discover the world.

'And' comes only before the last object is more than two of them are listed.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

She said "You can do that Julie" speking to herself.


She said, "You can do that Julie", speaking to herself.

She said, "You can do that Julie," speaking to herself.

I'd expect this to be "you can do it" as a general motivator which can be about anything. If you use "that," then it is specifically about something that has already been mentioned (which is a context that we don't see here in reading your post)

She said, "You can do that Julie" speaking to herself.

Before dialogue, comma should come. Spelling error in speaking

She said, "You can do that Julie" while speaking to herself.

But when you're growing up, your self talk became more negative, it says you can't do that or you're no good.


ButHowever, when you're growing up, your self talk becaomes more negative, it sayssaying you can't do that or you're no good.

But when you're growing up, your self -talk becaomes more negative, it sayssaying you can't do that or that you're no good.

But when you're growing up, your self talk became more negative, it says you can't do that or you're no good.

But whenas you're growing up, your self talk becames more negative,; it says you can't do that or you're no good.

So, the doctor says an advice we all can do easily, we have to self talk like we could talk to our best friend.


So, the doctor says ansome advice we all can dofollow easily, is that we have to self talktalk to ourselves like we cwould talk to our best friend.

So, the doctor says an advice we all canadvises doing something we can all do easily, - we have to self talktalk to ourselves like we cwould talk to our best friend.

Advice isn't quantitative. To make it quantitative, you could say "piece of advice," but I would just use the verb here

So, the doctor says an advice we all cangives advice that we can all do easily,; we have to self -talk like we cwould talk to our best friend.

It is only "advice" because advice is uncountable. Between self and talk there should be a dash

So, the doctor says angave some advice we all can do easily,: we have to self talk like we cwould talk to our best friend.

We have to be kind and positive with ourselfs.


We have to be kind and positive with ourselfves.

We have to be kind and positive with ourselfves.

We have to be kind and positive with ourselfs.ves

Not selfs, selves.

We have to be kind and positive with ourselfves.

Thanks for reading !


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Thanks for reading !

No space

Thanks for reading !

A doctor speaking in an emission who has a toddler said that sometimes, she talk out loud.


A doctor speaking in an emithe discussion who has a toddler said that sometimes, she talks out loud.

I'm not sure what you meant by "emission" here.

A doctor speaking in anone empissionode/clip/podcast/video who has a toddler herself said that sometimes, she talks out loud.

Like "transmission," we wouldn't use "emission," but something specific according to the type of content it was. I would add "herself" as a small emphasis

A doctor speaking in an emission who has a toddler said that sometimes, she talks out loud.

'She' is singular so s will come after the verb.

A doctor speaking in an emissionon the show who has a toddler said that sometimes, she talks out loud.

But the most interesting is that she self talked.


But tThe most interesting part is that she self talked to herself.

But the most interesting thing/part is that she self talked to herself.

Interesting is an adjective, it needs to be describing something

But the most interesting is that she self talkeds.

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