Dec. 8, 2025
Watching American TV drama
Last weekend, i watched a new American TV drama, All her fault. The drama is about a rich family that thier child was kidnapped. It is a hot drama, the story is very attractive. Maybe many people have watched it.
In the drama, a rich family employed a babysitter only 20 or 21 yeas old. She is no any experrience of being a mom. I don't know if it can be happened in reality.Because no one believes that the girl has ability of babysitter.
Anyway, i never would like such a young woman to take care of my child.
Watching an American TV dDrama
Last weekend, iI watched a new American TV drama, called All hHer fFault.
Capitalization of “I” and proper noun formatting (title of drama)
• Added “called” to introduce the title naturally
The drama is about a rich family that thierwhose child was kidnapped.
Corrected spelling: “thier” → “their”
• “whose” is grammatically correct to show possession
It is a hot drama,very popular, and the story is very attractiveengaging.
“Hot drama” is informal/slang; “popular” sounds more natural
• “Attractive” → “engaging” for describing a story
Maybe many people have watched it.
She is no anyhad no experrience of being a momther.
Corrected grammar: “is no any” → “had no”
• “mom” → “mother” for slightly more formal tone
• Corrected spelling: “experrience” → “experience”
I don'’t know if it can be happened in realitysomething like this could happen in real life, because no one would believe that the girl has the ability to be a good babysitter.
Corrected tense: “can be happened” → “could happen”
• Combined the sentences for smoother flow
• Added “to be a good babysitter” for clarity
Because no one believes that the girl has ability of babysitter.
Combined the sentences for smoother flow
Anyway, i never would likeI would never want such a young woman to take care of my child.
• Corrected word order and grammar: “never would like” → “would never want”
• Capitalized “I”
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You did a great job describing the drama and sharing your personal opinion! Your ideas are clear, and it’s easy to follow what you thought about the story. You also gave details that make your opinion believable, like the babysitter’s age and lack of experience.
To improve, pay attention to spelling, capitalization, and grammar, especially verb forms and word order. For example, “is no any experrience” should be “had no experience,” and “i” should always be “I.” Combining short sentences can also make your writing smoother and easier to read.
Keep sharing your thoughts about shows like this—you’re doing well, and practicing small corrections like these will make your English even stronger!
Watching an American TV drama
Last weekend, iI watched a new American TV drama, All her fault.
NOTE: The name of the show "All her fault" would be in italics.
Theis drama is about a rich family that thierwhose child was kidnapped.
我的猜测: It is a hot drama, the story is verypopular drama with an attractive story.
注意: The word "hot" has many meanings. Often it means "passionate" and "sexy." (Perhaps "popular" is a better choice?)
Maybe many people have watched it更有说服力的是: In November 2025 it was ranked among the top five streaming programs in the USA.
See https://variety.com/2025/tv/news/all-her-fault-ratings-peacock-1236605448/
In the drama, a rich family employed a babysitter who was only 20 or 21 yeas old.
She ishad no any experrience of being a mom.
I don't know if it can be happened in reality.更有说服力的是: In the USA, even teenagers can serve as babysitters.
See https://www.parents.com/how-old-do-you-have-to-be-to-babysit-8782283
FYI, my sister started babysitting at age 16. However, she was only able to babysit at families that my father knew well. (We lived in the state of New Hampshire back then.)
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不同文化对此可能有不同的看法。以下是一种可能的表述：In China, few people believes that thea girl has ability ofto be an effective babysitter.
Anyway, i never would likeI would never let such a young woman to take care of my child.
Just curious: if she was your cousin and you knew her family well, would it be okay?
(In *rural* parts of the USA young people often babysit. In *urban* parts of the USA, there is often lack of trust and
people are more isolated. My hometown had only 4,538 people.)
Dec. 16, 2025
Thanks for your corrected.I live in Shanghai and it has about 2,500,000 people. But I like small town.
Watching an American TV drama
This should have an article unless the topic is watching American TV dramas in general (in which case it should be plural)
Last weekend, iI watched a new American TV drama, "All hHer fFault".
Titles should be capitalised. You can also place it in quotation marks to make it extra clear.
The drama is about a rich family that thierwhose child was kidnapped.
It is a hotcompelling drama, the story is very attractiveinteresting.
I'm not entirely sure what you wanted to say here but the original sentence gave an impression of the drama featuring sexy scenes and attractive actors, which I'm not sure you wanted to say.
Maybe many people have watched it.
In the drama, a rich family employed a babysitter who was only 20 or 21 yeas old.
If this is the same rich family whose child was kidnapped it would be better to write "the family" instead of "a rich family". The sentence as it is gives the impression that it's a different rich family
She ihas no any experrience of being a mom.
I don't know if it can bethat could happened in reality.
Here you could replace "could happen in reality" with "is realistic".
Because no one believes that the girl has the ability tof babysitter.
Anyway, i never wouldI would never like such a young woman to take care of my child.
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Good work! Keep it up.
Dec. 8, 2025
Thanks for you corrected, i want to say that the drama is very popule and many people watched it.
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The drama is about a rich family that thier child was kidnapped. The drama is about a rich family Th The drama is about a rich family Corrected spelling: “thier” → “their” • “whose” is grammatically correct to show possession |
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It is a hot drama, the story is very attractive. It is a I'm not entirely sure what you wanted to say here but the original sentence gave an impression of the drama featuring sexy scenes and attractive actors, which I'm not sure you wanted to say. 我的猜测: It is a 注意: The word "hot" has many meanings. Often it means "passionate" and "sexy." (Perhaps "popular" is a better choice?) It is “Hot drama” is informal/slang; “popular” sounds more natural • “Attractive” → “engaging” for describing a story |
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Maybe many people have watched it. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
See https://variety.com/2025/tv/news/all-her-fault-ratings-peacock-1236605448/ Maybe many people have watched it. |
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In the drama, a rich family employed a babysitter only 20 or 21 yeas old. In the drama, a rich family employed a babysitter who was only 20 or 21 yeas old. If this is the same rich family whose child was kidnapped it would be better to write "the family" instead of "a rich family". The sentence as it is gives the impression that it's a different rich family In the drama, a rich family employed a babysitter who was only 20 or 21 yeas old. |
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She is no any experrience of being a mom. She She She Corrected grammar: “is no any” → “had no” • “mom” → “mother” for slightly more formal tone • Corrected spelling: “experrience” → “experience” |
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I don't know if it can be happened in reality. I don't know if Here you could replace "could happen in reality" with "is realistic".
See https://www.parents.com/how-old-do-you-have-to-be-to-babysit-8782283 FYI, my sister started babysitting at age 16. However, she was only able to babysit at families that my father knew well. (We lived in the state of New Hampshire back then.) I don Corrected tense: “can be happened” → “could happen” • Combined the sentences for smoother flow • Added “to be a good babysitter” for clarity |
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Because no one believes that the girl has ability of babysitter. Because no one believes that the girl has the ability to
Combined the sentences for smoother flow |
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Anyway, i never would like such a young woman to take care of my child. Anyway, Anyway, Just curious: if she was your cousin and you knew her family well, would it be okay? (In *rural* parts of the USA young people often babysit. In *urban* parts of the USA, there is often lack of trust and people are more isolated. My hometown had only 4,538 people.) Anyway, • Corrected word order and grammar: “never would like” → “would never want” • Capitalized “I” |
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It is a hot dram, the story is very attractive. |
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Last weekend, i watched a new American TV drama, All her fault. Last weekend, Titles should be capitalised. You can also place it in quotation marks to make it extra clear. Last weekend, NOTE: The name of the show "All her fault" would be in italics.
Capitalization of “I” and proper noun formatting (title of drama) • Added “called” to introduce the title naturally |
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