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yone

March 11, 2025

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Wasabi

I didn't use to eat wasabi when I was child. Now It is essential in my life when I eat tofu or rice. There is always a wasabi in my fridge. and, I like to but a wasabi taste snack at the supermarket. They are delicious. I think when people got adults their favourite flavor change.

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I didn't use to eat wasabi when I was child.

Now It is essential in my life when I eat tofu or rice.

There is always a wasabi in my fridge.

Wasabi is an uncountable noun, it's a paste, so you can have 'some wasabi' or 'a packet of wasabi'... you could also have 'a bottle of wasabi' , I hope this makes sense to you!

and, I like to buty a wasabi taste snack at the supermarket.

You can use 'a' here because you're talking about buying 'a snack' and using 'wasabi' to describe what type of snack it is. I took out 'taste' because it doesn't really make sense unless the snack was named 'Wasabi Taste'. You might have wanted to say: ' I like to buy a tasty wasabi snack at the supermarket'.

They are delicious.

I think when people gotbecome adults their favourite flavour changes.

You can either say: 'their favourite flavours change' or 'their favourite flavour changes'.

I added a 'u' to the spelling of flavour because you chose the British spelling of favourite. Without the 'u' is the US spelling. Obviously, the British version is the best ;)

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Well done! Your writing is definitely improving :)

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yone

March 12, 2025

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Thank you very much for your explanation.
You taught me many things. It's useful for me. I read it over and over.

Wasabi

I didn'tnever use to eat wasabi when I was child.

Now It iit’s essential in my life when I eat tofu or rice.

There is always a wasabi in my fridge.

and, I like to buty a wasabi tasteflavoured snack at the supermarket.

They are delicious.

I think when people got adultsrow up their favourite flavour changes.

‘become adults’ is also acceptable.

For ‘favourite’ you have used the British English spelling, but for ‘flavor’ the American English spelling. Both are correct, but be consistent.

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This is great - very easy to read and understand. Don’t forget contractions - ‘They are’ => ‘They’re’. It will sound more natural if you use them

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yone

March 11, 2025

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Thank you very much . I try to use constractions, when I write sentences.so, I will use"'flavour".

Wasabi


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I didn't use to eat wasabi when I was child.


I didn'tnever use to eat wasabi when I was child.

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Now It is essential in my life when I eat tofu or rice.


Now It iit’s essential in my life when I eat tofu or rice.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

There is always a wasabi in my fridge.


There is always a wasabi in my fridge.

There is always a wasabi in my fridge.

Wasabi is an uncountable noun, it's a paste, so you can have 'some wasabi' or 'a packet of wasabi'... you could also have 'a bottle of wasabi' , I hope this makes sense to you!

and, I like to but a wasabi taste snack at the supermarket.


and, I like to buty a wasabi tasteflavoured snack at the supermarket.

and, I like to buty a wasabi taste snack at the supermarket.

You can use 'a' here because you're talking about buying 'a snack' and using 'wasabi' to describe what type of snack it is. I took out 'taste' because it doesn't really make sense unless the snack was named 'Wasabi Taste'. You might have wanted to say: ' I like to buy a tasty wasabi snack at the supermarket'.

They are delicious.


They are delicious.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I think when people got adults their favourite flavor change.


I think when people got adultsrow up their favourite flavour changes.

‘become adults’ is also acceptable. For ‘favourite’ you have used the British English spelling, but for ‘flavor’ the American English spelling. Both are correct, but be consistent.

I think when people gotbecome adults their favourite flavour changes.

You can either say: 'their favourite flavours change' or 'their favourite flavour changes'. I added a 'u' to the spelling of flavour because you chose the British spelling of favourite. Without the 'u' is the US spelling. Obviously, the British version is the best ;)

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