April 24, 2025
It’s a sunny day. After a short shopping, together with my nephews and my wife will go in the park. We’ll walk around the lake, drink a coffee - for adults and the boys will eat ice cream. A walking for a hour will be good for charged our batteries.
Walking in the park
It’s a sunny day.
After a short shopping, togetherrip/After a bit of shopping, I will go with my nephews and my wife will go into the park.
We’ll walk around the lake, drink a coffee - for adults(for the adults, the boys will eat ice-cream). - or "the adults will drink coffee and the boys will eat ice -cream."
A wWalking for an hour will be good forto charged our batteries.
It’s a sunny day.
After a short shopping trip, together with my nephews and, my wife and I will go in the park.
We’ll walk around the lake, drink a coffee - for adultsthe adults will have coffee and the boys will eat ice cream.
Better: we'll take a walk around the lake...
To have coffee implies drinking coffee and is how we'd typically express this.
A walking for a hourn hour walk will be good for chargeding our batteries.
Alternative: Walking for an hour...
But you can't say "A walking"
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After a short shopping, together with my nephews and my wife will go in the park. After a short shopping After a short shopping trip, together with my nephews |
We’ll walk around the lake, drink a coffee - for adults and the boys will eat ice cream. We’ll walk around the lake, drink a coffee We’ll walk around the lake, Better: we'll take a walk around the lake... To have coffee implies drinking coffee and is how we'd typically express this. |
A walking for a hour will be good for charged our batteries.
A Alternative: Walking for an hour... But you can't say "A walking" |
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