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FlorianMos

April 24, 2025

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Walking in the park

It’s a sunny day. After a short shopping, together with my nephews and my wife will go in the park. We’ll walk around the lake, drink a coffee - for adults and the boys will eat ice cream. A walking for a hour will be good for charged our batteries.

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Walking in the park

It’s a sunny day.

After a short shopping, togetherrip/After a bit of shopping, I will go with my nephews and my wife will go into the park.

We’ll walk around the lake, drink a coffee - for adults(for the adults, the boys will eat ice-cream). - or "the adults will drink coffee and the boys will eat ice -cream."

A wWalking for an hour will be good forto charged our batteries.

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FlorianMos

April 24, 2025

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Thanks for your help!

It’s a sunny day.

After a short shopping trip, together with my nephews and, my wife and I will go in the park.

We’ll walk around the lake, drink a coffee - for adultsthe adults will have coffee and the boys will eat ice cream.

Better: we'll take a walk around the lake...
To have coffee implies drinking coffee and is how we'd typically express this.

A walking for a hourn hour walk will be good for chargeding our batteries.

Alternative: Walking for an hour...
But you can't say "A walking"

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FlorianMos

April 24, 2025

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Thanks for your help!

Walking in the park


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It’s a sunny day.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

After a short shopping, together with my nephews and my wife will go in the park.


After a short shopping, togetherrip/After a bit of shopping, I will go with my nephews and my wife will go into the park.

After a short shopping trip, together with my nephews and, my wife and I will go in the park.

We’ll walk around the lake, drink a coffee - for adults and the boys will eat ice cream.


We’ll walk around the lake, drink a coffee - for adults(for the adults, the boys will eat ice-cream). - or "the adults will drink coffee and the boys will eat ice -cream."

We’ll walk around the lake, drink a coffee - for adultsthe adults will have coffee and the boys will eat ice cream.

Better: we'll take a walk around the lake... To have coffee implies drinking coffee and is how we'd typically express this.

A walking for a hour will be good for charged our batteries.


A wWalking for an hour will be good forto charged our batteries.

A walking for a hourn hour walk will be good for chargeding our batteries.

Alternative: Walking for an hour... But you can't say "A walking"

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