April 23, 2025
Walking in the park
Today my wife and I will go to shopping and after that to a short walking in the park. The park is near the mall. There is many trees, a lake with many ducks. Many people walking and running in the park. Other people drink coffee or juice on the grass, or eat sandwiches. There is many little childrens with them parents. They laughing and playing each others. Today is a suny day, is warming and no windy.
Today, my wife and I will go to shopping and after that togo for a short walking in the park.
The park is near the mall.
There isare many trees, and a lake with many ducks.
MThere are many people walking and running in the park.
Original is not a complete sentence.
There isare many little childrens with themir parents.
*maybe remove "little" since children are already little. No need to describe it. At least in this sentence that is.
They are laughing and playing with each others.
Today is a sunny day,. It is warming and it is not windy.
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Today my wife and I will go to shopping and after that to, for a short walking in the park.
We describe this action as "going for a walk."
The park is near the mall.
There isare many trees, and a lake with many ducks.
There ARE many trees (because trees is plural).
Many people walking and running in the park.
You are describing a generality here, so you phrase it like this (walk and run). WalkING and runNING are used to describe an actions currently being performed, for example, if you were currently observing people walking or running.
Other people drink coffee or juice on the grass, or eat sandwiches.
There is many littleare usually many young childrens with themir parents.
Again, since you are describing generalities, I would add the word "usually" here. The word "children" is already plural, there is no S to add. We would usually use "young" or "small" children instead of "little."
They laughing and playing with each others.
No S needed for each other.
Today is a sunny day, is warming and not windy.
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April 23, 2025
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Today my wife and I will go to shopping and after that to a short walking in the park. Today, my wife and I will go Today my wife and I will go to shopping and after that We describe this action as "going for a walk." |
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The park is near the mall. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There is many trees, a lake with many ducks. There There There ARE many trees (because trees is plural). |
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Many people walking and running in the park.
Original is not a complete sentence. Many people walk You are describing a generality here, so you phrase it like this (walk and run). WalkING and runNING are used to describe an actions currently being performed, for example, if you were currently observing people walking or running. |
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Other people drink coffee or juice on the grass, or eat sandwiches. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There is many little childrens with them parents. There *maybe remove "little" since children are already little. No need to describe it. At least in this sentence that is. There Again, since you are describing generalities, I would add the word "usually" here. The word "children" is already plural, there is no S to add. We would usually use "young" or "small" children instead of "little." |
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They laughing and playing each others. They are laughing and playing with each other They laugh No S needed for each other. |
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Today is a suny day, is warming and no windy. Today is a sunny day Today is a sunny day, |
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