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Abigail

June 14, 2025

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Violencia en las calles del Perú

When I go out of my house and I go to my english class, most of the time I have seen people fighting, stealing even killing them, and I'm afraid of that happend to me. I have to go to my classes with my mom, because she's afraid to that happen to me. Dina Boluarte who is the president from Perú, doesn't do anything about it. A lot of people have died trying to fend, some cases they kill them for not have nothing to steal from them. I would like that this situation improve for the people's safe


Cuando salgo de mi casa y me dirijo a mis clases de inglés, la mayoría de las veces yo he visto personas peleando, robando incluso matándose, y tengo miedo de que me pase a mi. Yo tengo que ir a mis clases con mi mamá porque ella teme a que me pase algo. Dina Boluarte, que es la presidenta del perú, no hace nada al respecto. Muchas personas han muerto por tratar de defenderse, en algunos casos los matan por no tener nada que robarles. Me gustaría que esta situación mejore por el bienestar de todos.

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Violencia en las calles del Perú

When I go out ofever I leave my house and I go to my eEnglish class, most of the time I have seen people fighting, stealing, and even killing each othemr, and I'm afraid of that happending to me.

I have to go to my classes with my mom, because she's afraid to thaof it happening to me.

Dina Boluarte, who is the president ofrom Perú, doesn't do anything about it.

A lot of people have died trying to defend, some cases they kill them for not have nothing to steal from them themselves, and in some cases people are killed for not having anything that could be stolen.

I would like thatfor this situation to improve for the people's safety.

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This sounds horrific, I hope you're able to stay safe and that something is done about the issue. Please be careful outside :(

When I go out of my house and I go to my english class, most of the time I haveto my English class, I often seen people fighting, stealing, or even killing them, aeach other. And I'm afraid of that happending to me.

I have to go to my classes with my mom, because she's afraid tof that happening to me.

Dina Boluarte who is the president ofrom Perúu, doesn't do anything about it.

This sentence is good. You could also add "Unfortunately" or "Sadly" at the beginning of the sentence.

A lot of people have died trying to fend, some cases they kill them for not off the attackers, and in some cases they are even killed because they haved nothing to steal from themof value to be stolen.

The use of "they" pronoun in this sentence is confusing because it's not immediately obvious whether you are talking about the victims or the perpetrators.

I would like thato see this situation improve for the sake of people's safety.

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Overall, I can understand what you are trying to communicate - solid effort!

I'm sorry that this is your reality :( I hope you and your loved ones stay safe in the midst of all this violence.

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Abigail

June 15, 2025

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Thank you!

I would like that this situation improve for the people's safe


I would like thato see this situation improve for the sake of people's safety.

I would like thatfor this situation to improve for the people's safety.

When I go out of my house and I go to my english class, most of the time I have seen people fighting, stealing even killing them, and I'm afraid of that happend to me.


When I go out of my house and I go to my english class, most of the time I haveto my English class, I often seen people fighting, stealing, or even killing them, aeach other. And I'm afraid of that happending to me.

When I go out ofever I leave my house and I go to my eEnglish class, most of the time I have seen people fighting, stealing, and even killing each othemr, and I'm afraid of that happending to me.

Violencia en las calles del Perú


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have to go to my classes with my mom, because she's afraid to that happen to me.


I have to go to my classes with my mom, because she's afraid tof that happening to me.

I have to go to my classes with my mom, because she's afraid to thaof it happening to me.

Dina Boluarte who is the president from Perú, doesn't do anything about it.


Dina Boluarte who is the president ofrom Perúu, doesn't do anything about it.

This sentence is good. You could also add "Unfortunately" or "Sadly" at the beginning of the sentence.

Dina Boluarte, who is the president ofrom Perú, doesn't do anything about it.

A lot of people have died trying to fend, some cases they kill them for not have nothing to steal from them.


A lot of people have died trying to fend, some cases they kill them for not off the attackers, and in some cases they are even killed because they haved nothing to steal from themof value to be stolen.

The use of "they" pronoun in this sentence is confusing because it's not immediately obvious whether you are talking about the victims or the perpetrators.

A lot of people have died trying to defend, some cases they kill them for not have nothing to steal from them themselves, and in some cases people are killed for not having anything that could be stolen.

When I go out of my house and y go to my english class, most of the time I have seen people fighting, stealing even killing them, and I'm afraid of that happend to me.


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