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SrPromax

June 9, 2025

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In last post´s I mentioned my hobbies, and by far one of my favorites is video games. I love shooters the most, like Counter Strike, Battlefield (not the last one), and Valorant, but I´ve played a lot of different genres, like MOBAS and MMOS. Now I can´t play a lot cause of my studies, but sometimes on evening I play one or two hours of LOL and GTA 5 with friends. If I would like to make a tier list of my favorites video games of all time, my top would be; Minecraft, Gta V, Valorant and Battlefield 4. Even if in the future I couldn´t play a lot because of my job or studies, I will continue doing what makes me happy, playing Video games :)

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In last post´s I mentioned my hobbies, and bmy far one of my favorites isvorite by far is playing video games.

1. “Post’s” basically means “post is”. And it doesn’t need to be plural here
2. I rearranged to sentence to make it flow better and look more natural, and also added “playing” because you like PLAYING video games. It just makes it sound more natural :)

Now I can´t play a lot cause of my studies, but sometimes onin the evening I play one or two hours of LOL and GTA 5 with friends.

If I wcould like to make a tier list of my favorites video games of all time, my top 4 would be; Minecraft, Gta V, Valorant and Battlefield 4.

1. “If I could” sounds a lot more natural here
2. I added “4” after “top” because in English we normally say the number of things we’re rating/ranking. So if you were making a list of your 10 favorite movies you’d say “I’m going to make a list of my top 10 favorite movies”. There’s nothing wrong with what you wrote and it works perfectly fine, but this can help you sound more natural if that’s what you’re going for

Even ifIf even in the future I couldn´an’t play a lot because of my job or studies, I will continue doing what makes me happy, playing Video games :)

1. “If” comes before “even” here. Not entirely sure how to explain it, sorry
2. You would use “can’t” instead of “couldn’t” here because even though couldn’t refers to future/hypothetical events, we’d still use “can’t” here. Also not sure why, might just be a dumb English thing, and also I’m too tired to look it up 😭

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Hello fellow video game enthusiast :D

In lasmy recent post´s I mentioned my hobbies, and by far one of my favorites is video games.

I love shooters the most, like Counter Strike, Battlefield (not the last one), and Valorant, but I´ve played a lot of different genres, like MOBAS and MMOS.

Now I can´t play a lot (be)cause of my studies, but sometimes on evening I play one or two hours of LOL and GTA 5 with friends.

"because of" is proper english, though in informal conversations and texting we sometimes use "cause of".

If I would likere to make a tier list of my favorites video games of all time, my top would be;: Minecraft, Gta V, Valorant and Battlefield 4.

Even if in the future I couldn´t play a lot because of my job or studies, I will continue doing what makes me happy, playing Video games :)

Video games

In my last post´s, I mentioned my hobbies, and b. By far, one of my favorites is video games.

I love s'Shooters' the most, like 'Counter Strike', 'Battlefield' (not the last one), and 'Valorant', but I´ve played a lot of different genres, like 'MOBAS' and 'MMOS'.

Now, I can´t play a lot because of my studies, but sometimes onin the evening, I play one or two hours of 'LOL' and 'GTA 5' with my friends.

If I could, I would like to make a tier list of my favorites video games of all time, m. My top would be; : 'Minecraft', Gta'GTA V', 'Valorant' and 'Battlefield 4'.

Even if iIn the future, even if I couldn´t play a lot because of my job or studies, I willould continue doing what makes me happy, playing Vvideo games :) .

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Well done!

Video games


Video games

In last post´s I mentioned my hobbies, and by far one of my favorites is video games.


In my last post´s, I mentioned my hobbies, and b. By far, one of my favorites is video games.

In lasmy recent post´s I mentioned my hobbies, and by far one of my favorites is video games.

In last post´s I mentioned my hobbies, and bmy far one of my favorites isvorite by far is playing video games.

1. “Post’s” basically means “post is”. And it doesn’t need to be plural here 2. I rearranged to sentence to make it flow better and look more natural, and also added “playing” because you like PLAYING video games. It just makes it sound more natural :)

I love shooters the most, like Counter Strike, Battlefield (not the last one), and Valorant, but I´ve played a lot of different genres, like MOBAS and MMOS.


I love s'Shooters' the most, like 'Counter Strike', 'Battlefield' (not the last one), and 'Valorant', but I´ve played a lot of different genres, like 'MOBAS' and 'MMOS'.

I love shooters the most, like Counter Strike, Battlefield (not the last one), and Valorant, but I´ve played a lot of different genres, like MOBAS and MMOS.

Now I can´t play a lot cause of my studies, but sometimes on evening I play one or two hours of LOL and GTA 5 with friends.


Now, I can´t play a lot because of my studies, but sometimes onin the evening, I play one or two hours of 'LOL' and 'GTA 5' with my friends.

Now I can´t play a lot (be)cause of my studies, but sometimes on evening I play one or two hours of LOL and GTA 5 with friends.

"because of" is proper english, though in informal conversations and texting we sometimes use "cause of".

Now I can´t play a lot cause of my studies, but sometimes onin the evening I play one or two hours of LOL and GTA 5 with friends.

If I would like to make a tier list of my favorites video games of all time, my top would be; Minecraft, Gta V, Valorant and Battlefield 4.


If I could, I would like to make a tier list of my favorites video games of all time, m. My top would be; : 'Minecraft', Gta'GTA V', 'Valorant' and 'Battlefield 4'.

If I would likere to make a tier list of my favorites video games of all time, my top would be;: Minecraft, Gta V, Valorant and Battlefield 4.

If I wcould like to make a tier list of my favorites video games of all time, my top 4 would be; Minecraft, Gta V, Valorant and Battlefield 4.

1. “If I could” sounds a lot more natural here 2. I added “4” after “top” because in English we normally say the number of things we’re rating/ranking. So if you were making a list of your 10 favorite movies you’d say “I’m going to make a list of my top 10 favorite movies”. There’s nothing wrong with what you wrote and it works perfectly fine, but this can help you sound more natural if that’s what you’re going for

Even if in the future I couldn´t play a lot because of my job or studies, I will continue doing what makes me happy, playing Video games :)


Even if iIn the future, even if I couldn´t play a lot because of my job or studies, I willould continue doing what makes me happy, playing Vvideo games :) .

Even if in the future I couldn´t play a lot because of my job or studies, I will continue doing what makes me happy, playing Video games :)

Even ifIf even in the future I couldn´an’t play a lot because of my job or studies, I will continue doing what makes me happy, playing Video games :)

1. “If” comes before “even” here. Not entirely sure how to explain it, sorry 2. You would use “can’t” instead of “couldn’t” here because even though couldn’t refers to future/hypothetical events, we’d still use “can’t” here. Also not sure why, might just be a dumb English thing, and also I’m too tired to look it up 😭

If i would like to make a tier list of my favorites video games of all time, my top would be; Minecraft, Gta V, Valorant and Battlefield 4.


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