May 9, 2021
Using a Mac PC
I bought a Mac PC for managing my Apple devices more easier.
It is the first time in the Mac environment, so I am not familiar not only to use a mouse device but also to copy files, to manage them and so on.
It seems like that I just arrived a new country.
My old experiences are not suitable for this new environment.
But this PC reduces my stresses about using my Apple-made devices.
It is more easy to copy musics into my iPhone, and it is convenient to manage files from my iPad.
I think, this PC will make many interesting experiences for me.
Using a Mac PC
I bought a Mac PC for managing my Apple devices more easierly.
It is themy first time in the Mac environment, so I am not familiar not only to useusing a Mac, so not only am I unfamiliar with using a mouse device, but also with how to copy files, to manage them, and so on.
It sfeemls like that I just arrived in a new country.
I think "feels" works better than "seems" here. You could also say "It's like I just arrived in a new country."
My old experiences are not suitable fordon't apply to this new environment.
But this PC reduces my stresses about using my Apple-made devices.
I would probably write this as "But this PC makes using my Apple-made devices (easier/more convenient/less stressful)."
It is more easyeasier to copy musics into my iPhone, and it is convenient to manage files from my iPad.
It's always just "music" whether you're referring to one song/style or many.
I think, using this PC will makbe many interesting experiences for me.
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Even computer science professors I had in college would be lost when trying to use a mac.
May 10, 2021
I agree that. And thank you for correcting my sentences.
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I bought a Mac PC for managing my Apple devices more easier. I bought a Mac PC for managing my Apple devices more easi |
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It is the first time in the Mac environment, so I am not familiar not only to use a mouse device but also to copy files, to manage them and so on. It is |
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It seems like that I just arrived a new country. It I think "feels" works better than "seems" here. You could also say "It's like I just arrived in a new country." |
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My old experiences are not suitable for this new environment. My old experiences |
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But this PC reduces my stresses about using my Apple-made devices. But this PC reduces my stress I would probably write this as "But this PC makes using my Apple-made devices (easier/more convenient/less stressful)." |
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It is more easy to copy musics into my iPhone, and it is convenient to manage files from my iPad. It is It's always just "music" whether you're referring to one song/style or many. |
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I think, this PC will make many interesting experiences for me. I think |
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