April 9, 2025
Unwanted Married People
Recently, I see so many young people they have not wanted to get married anymore because of various reasons, here are some in my opinion:
1. The inflation and financial pressure: the money is getting more and more lost its value, and young people have to face financial problems all the time and can not afford their own house.
2. The freedom: because the single life gives young people the chance to decide whatever they want to do. The two people come together and share space, time, and resources... Moreover, if we don't know how to listen and communicate in an effective way, the differences between two of you will end up with quarrels.
3. Responsibility: young people used to hear some stories about how hard to give birth to a baby and how hard to raise them up, this progress requires a lot of sympathy, responsibility and sacrifice. Young people are in the comfort zone with freedom, work cycle, relationships....and they are afraid to step out of comfort zone to face with something new which is more challenging.
Recently, I see so many young people they have not wanteding to get married anymore because of various reasons, here are some inof my opinion:
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In this sentence, you don't need the 'they'. The young people suffice. You have multiple opinions, you need a pluralizer at the end of 'opinion'.
The inflation and financial pressure: the money is gettlosing more and more lostof its value, and young people have to face financial problems all the time and can not afford their own house.
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The freedom: because the single life gives young people the chance to decide whatever they want to do.
Theat two people can come together and share space, time, and resources...
Moreover, if we don't know how to listen and communicate in an effective way, the differences between two of youpeople will end up with quarrels.
If you are not talking about specific people, saying 'people' will suffice. 'Quarrel' is an odd word. It's not incorrect, but it's more common to use words like 'argument' or 'disagreement' Quarrel is used more like a verb (ex: "She and I quarrel a lot")
Responsibility: young people used to hear some stories about how hard it is to give birth to a baby and how hard it is to raise them up, this progress requires a lot of sympathy, responsibility and sacrifice.
Need 'it is' to tie the sentences together
Young people are in their comfort zone with freedom, work cycle, relationships....and they are afraid to step out of their comfort zone to face with something new, which is more challenging to do.
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Very good writing!
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Moreover, if we don't know how to listen and communicate in an effective way, the differences between two of youpeople will end up within quarrels.
Responsibility: young people used to hear some stories about how hard it is to give birth to a baby and how hard it is to raise them up, t. This progrcess requires a lot of sympathy, responsibility and sacrifice.
Unwanted Married People
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I'm assuming that you're picturing a monogamous couple that choose to live together.
This is an incomplete sentence. What do you think are some troubles when a couple live with each other?
I gave you some ideas.
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Relationships can be extremely challenging, especially when you live together. I like your take on it.
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Moreover, if we don't know how to listen and communicate in an effective way, the differences between the two of you will end up with quarrels.
Responsibility:- young people used to hear some stories about how hard it is to give birth to a baby and how hard it is to raise them up, t. This progrcess requires a lot of sympathy, responsibility and sacrifice.
Young people are in the comfort zone with freedom, work cycle, relationships....and t, etc. They are afraid to step out of their comfort zone to face with something new which is more challenging.
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Well done!
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"unwanted married people" implies that the people are married, and also unwanted. Since you are talking about people who are not married, the title could either be "unmarried people" or, if you wanted to be more specific, "unmarried people who don't want to marry"
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Since you are listing the reasons you think that young people have for not getting married, I think it would sound more natural to say "that I have heard" or "that I have seen" rather than "in my opinion."
The inflation and financial pressure: the money is getting more and more lost its valudollar has lost its value more and more, and young people have to face financial problems all the time and can not afford their own house.
when we are talking about inflation, we usually specific the currency (dollar, peso, yen, etc) rather than talking about "the money" in general.
The freedom: because the single life gives young people the chance to decide whatever they want to do.
TWhen two people come together andthey share space, time, and resources...
Moreover, if wethey don't know how to listen and communicate in an effective way, the differences between two of youhem will end up with quarrels.
In this hypothetical, the pronouns should match in person. So either "if we... between us" or "if you.... between you" or "if they.... between them." I think, since the previous sentence was in third person ("two people come"), this one should be also. This maintains continuity between the two ideas.
Responsibility: young people used to hear somehear stories about how hard it is to give birth to a baby and how hard it is to raise them up, t. This progrcess requires a lot of sympathy, responsibility and sacrifice.
Young people are in their comfort zones with freedom, work cycle, relationships....and they are afraid to step out of comfort zoneit to face with something new which is more challenging.
I think either "the comfort zone" or "their comfort zones" works here. After the ellipses (....) you can use a pronoun (it) instead of the whole phrase again, but this is optional.
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This is a difficult topic but you did a good job expressing complex ideas!
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Unwanted Married People Un "unwanted married people" implies that the people are married, and also unwanted. Since you are talking about people who are not married, the title could either be "unmarried people" or, if you wanted to be more specific, "unmarried people who don't want to marry" This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The inflation and financial pressure: the money is getting more and more lost its value, and young people have to face financial problems all the time and can not afford their own house. The inflation and financial pressure: the when we are talking about inflation, we usually specific the currency (dollar, peso, yen, etc) rather than talking about "the money" in general. The inflation and financial pressure
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The two people come together and share space, time, and resources...
I'm assuming that you're picturing a monogamous couple that choose to live together. This is an incomplete sentence. What do you think are some troubles when a couple live with each other? I gave you some ideas.
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The freedom: because the single life gives young people the chance to decide whatever they want to do. This sentence has been marked as perfect! The freedom
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Moreover, if we don't know how to listen and communicate in an effective way, the differences between two of you will end up with quarrels. Moreover, if In this hypothetical, the pronouns should match in person. So either "if we... between us" or "if you.... between you" or "if they.... between them." I think, since the previous sentence was in third person ("two people come"), this one should be also. This maintains continuity between the two ideas. Moreover, if we don't know how to listen and communicate in an effective way, the differences between the two of you will end up with quarrels. Moreover, if we don't know how to listen and communicate in an effective way, the differences between two of you will end up with lots of arguments/quarrels. Moreover, if we don't know how to listen and communicate in an effective way, the differences between two Moreover, if we don't know how to listen and communicate in an effective way, the differences between two If you are not talking about specific people, saying 'people' will suffice. 'Quarrel' is an odd word. It's not incorrect, but it's more common to use words like 'argument' or 'disagreement' Quarrel is used more like a verb (ex: "She and I quarrel a lot") |
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Young people are in the comfort zone with freedom, work cycle, relationships....and they are afraid to step out of comfort zone to face with something new which is more challenging. Young people are in their comfort zones with freedom, work I think either "the comfort zone" or "their comfort zones" works here. After the ellipses (....) you can use a pronoun (it) instead of the whole phrase again, but this is optional. Young people are in the comfort zone with freedom, work cycle, relationships Young people Young people are in their comfort zone with freedom, work cycle, relationships....and they are afraid to step out of their comfort zone to face |
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