Nov. 6, 2025
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My university has student dormitories for sharing. Both rent and utilites are very unexpensive, and they are relatively clean and not too cramped. I asked one of my friend who lived in the dormitory how the life there is, and she answered that one thing she feels troublesome is that since the cost for air conditionar for shared space is shared amoung all those who live in the room, everyone become reluctant to turn on the air conditionar when they are alone even if it is hot or cold.
私の大学には学生寮があり、家賃も光熱費もとても安く、比較的清潔で狭くもありません。寮に住んでいた友人に寮生活について聞いたところ、共有スペースのエアコン代が寮生全員で分担されるため、暑くても寒くても、一人でいる時はエアコンをつけるのをためらってしまうことが悩ましいと話していました。
My university has student dormitories for sharing.
The defining fact for dorms (as opposed to e.g. apartments) is that they are shared, so you don't need to reiterate that
Both rent and utilities are very uinexpensive, and they are relatively clean and not too cramped.
I asked one of my friends who lived in the dormitory how the life there iwas, and she answered that one thing she feels was troublesome is that since the cost for air conditionaring for the shared space is shared
"who lived in the dormitory" is past tense and implies she has since moved out. So that needs other parts of the sentence to be in past tense too.
amoung all those who live in the room, everyone becoame reluctant to turn on the air conditionaer when they awere alone even if it iwas hot or cold.
Nov. 10, 2025
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My university has student dormitories for shared housing.
Dorms would be described as "shared housing"
Both rent and utilities are very uinexpensive, and they rooms are relatively clean and not too cramped.
I would reference what is clean and not cramped
I asked one of my friends who has lived in the dormitory how the life there isthere for a while now how life is in the dorm, and she answered that one thing she feels is troublesome is that since the cost for air conditionar for shared spaceof running the air conditioning is shared
"Who lived at the dorm" would imply that she lived there and has now left, but if she lived there and STILL lives there, you'd say "who has lived there for (duration)"
amoung all those who live in the room/dorm, everyone becomeis reluctant to turn on the air conditionarit on when they are alone, even if it is hot or cold.
An "air conditioner" is to reference cold air only; we'd say "heat/heating/heater" for warm air
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Nov. 10, 2025
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University dormitory
My university has shared student dormitories for sharing.
This phrasing is more natural.
Both rent and utilites are very uinexpensive, and they are relatively clean, and not too cramped.
I can see why you'd think it's "unexpensive", but unfortunately the word is an exception and is instead "inexpensive".
This can made a list using commas to avoid repeating "and" too much.
I asked one of my friend who lived in the dormitory how the life there is, and s. She answered that one thing she feels is troublesome is that since the cost for air conditionaer for shared space is shared
This is a very long run-on sentence so it's best to split it up a bit.
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amoung all those who live in the room, everyone becomes reluctant to turn on the air conditionaer when they are alone even if it is hot or cold.
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In the UK it's actually quite uncommon for housing of any kind to have air conditioning. People often think of it as too expensive, even in hot weather during the summer.
Nov. 10, 2025
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In Japan, summer temperatures have been rising over the years (around 38° at the highest this year), and more and more people are installing air conditioners.
Nov. 10, 2025
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Nov. 10, 2025
It's the same over here, except people still don't install air conditioning! In recent years we've had peaks of up to 40 degrees in the summer. Shops and businesses usually have air conditioning at least.
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I asked one of my friend who lived in the dormitory how the life there is, and she answered that one thing she feels troublesome is that since the cost for air conditionar for shared space is shared I asked one of my friend who lived in the dormitory how This is a very long run-on sentence so it's best to split it up a bit. Spelling. I asked one of my friends who has lived "Who lived at the dorm" would imply that she lived there and has now left, but if she lived there and STILL lives there, you'd say "who has lived there for (duration)" I asked one of my friends who lived in the dormitory how the life there "who lived in the dormitory" is past tense and implies she has since moved out. So that needs other parts of the sentence to be in past tense too. |
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