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April 28, 2021

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Une journée de pique-nique

J’ai fait un pique-nique samedi. C’est l’été. Il fait chaud. J’ai mangé des sandwiches, des tartes et des fruits. J’ai bu le jus froid parce que j’ai eu soif.


I had a picnic on Saturday. It was summer. It was hot. I ate sandwiches, pies and fruits. I drank the cold juice because I was thirsty.

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Une journée de pique-nique

J’ai fait un pique-nique samedi.

C’esétait l’été.

Just like in English, you can use a past tense here to refer to that particular past context (even if it's still true it's summer as you're speaking)

Il faisait chaud.

J’ai mangé des sandwiches, des tartes et des fruits.

J’ai bu ledu jus de fruits froid parce que j’ai euvais soif.

J'ai bu (punctual action, considered as a result); J'avais soif (imparfait, background action, a process that was going on)

Une journée de pique-nique


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J’ai fait un pique-nique samedi.


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C’est l’été.


C’esétait l’été.

Just like in English, you can use a past tense here to refer to that particular past context (even if it's still true it's summer as you're speaking)

Il fait chaud.


Il faisait chaud.

J’ai mangé des sandwiches, des tartes et des fruits.


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J’ai bu le jus froid parce que j’ai eu soif.


J’ai bu ledu jus de fruits froid parce que j’ai euvais soif.

J'ai bu (punctual action, considered as a result); J'avais soif (imparfait, background action, a process that was going on)

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