June 2, 2021
Uber
Just watched a video about how much can a uber driver make within a month.
Actually, I think there will be so many same title videos you can found.
The video that I watched was a 20 something man.
He didn’t use his own car, so he rent the lowest rate of an uber car.
He also didn’t work as full time, some week worked 5 days, some week just one day.
But the way he presents the data was clear and easy to understand.
As result he didn’t make positive income.
But he can manage to found a new job from a customer.
I wonder he what else he can explore from the customers…
Uber
Just watched a video about how much can a uber driver can make within a month.
Actually, I think there will be so many same title videos you can founda lot of similar videos to this one.
The video that I watched was about a 20 something year old man.
He didn’t use his own car, so hebut rented the lowest rate of an uber carcheapest one from Uber instead.
Do you mean to say that he didn't have a car or had one, but decided to use a rental?
He also didn’t work as full time, some weeks he worked for 5 days, some week and others just one1 day.
But the way the video presentsed the data was clear and easy to understand.
Do you mean the driver presented the data or that the idea of the video was clear.
As resultBecause he didn't work full-time, he didn’'t make positive incomea profit.
I think this needs restate the context since the previous sentence changes it to talking about the data.
But he can managIn the end, he was able to fouind a new job from a customone of his passengers.
This is just a guess to how the video ended, but I'd say something like "In the end, ..." or "Luckily, he was able to...".
I wonder he what else he can explore from the customers…gain from his passengers ...
Do you mean to say that networking with passengers can benefit his job search?
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Just watched a video about how much can a uber driver make within a month. Just watched a video about how much |
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Actually, I think there will be so many same title videos you can found. Actually, I think there will be |
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The video that I watched was a 20 something man. The video |
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He didn’t use his own car, so he rent the lowest rate of an uber car. He didn’t use his own car, Do you mean to say that he didn't have a car or had one, but decided to use a rental? |
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He also didn’t work as full time, some week worked 5 days, some week just one day. He also didn’t work |
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But the way he presents the data was clear and easy to understand. But the way the video present Do you mean the driver presented the data or that the idea of the video was clear. |
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As result he didn’t make positive income.
I think this needs restate the context since the previous sentence changes it to talking about the data. |
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But he can manage to found a new job from a customer.
This is just a guess to how the video ended, but I'd say something like "In the end, ..." or "Luckily, he was able to...". |
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I wonder he what else he can explore from the customers… I wonder he what else he can Do you mean to say that networking with passengers can benefit his job search? |
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