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Tammy

April 21, 2025

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Two Videos I Took Yesterday

It's a busy day today, so I'm writing this entry in rush.

I just want to show you two videos that I took yesterday when I was jogging along the river near my apartment.

The first one is about two brunches of lovely roses (https://www.youtube.com/shorts/L7xgnDnB1-w). They were blossoming so lively.

The second one (https://www.youtube.com/shorts/9LX7goTfmgs) is about the river views, a beautiful iris, and a cute cat.

Hope you like them as well.

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Two Videos I Took Yesterday

It's a busy day today, so I'm writing this entry in rush.

I just want to show you two videos that I took yesterday when I was jogging along the river near my apartment.

The first one is about two brunches of lovely roses (https://www.youtube.com/shorts/L7xgnDnB1-w).

'brunch' is a portmanteau of 'breakfast' and 'lunch' for a mean that is a late breakfast/early lunch. The word you need is 'bunch'.

They were blossoming so lively.had such lovely blossoms.

The second one (https://www.youtube.com/shorts/9LX7goTfmgs) is about the river views, a beautiful iris, and a cute cat.

HI hope you like them as well.

It is more correct to put 'I' at the start but you could casually say it as you have written it.

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What pleasant videos. It all looks very peaceful.

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Tammy

April 21, 2025

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Thank you so much!

Have a nice day!

Two Videos I Took Yesterday

It's a busy day today, so I'm writing this entry in a rush.

The first one is about two bruanches of lovely roses (https://www.youtube.com/shorts/L7xgnDnB1-w).

* I figured you were trying to say "branches" [ the stem of the roses ] instead of brunches.
* or maybe you were trying to say "bunch" [ meaning a "couple of lovely roses" ]
* I saw the video, you can also say "The first one is about a bunch of two lovely roses".

* If I were to describe it, I would say "the first video is about a couple of lovely roses".

They were blossoming so lively.

The second one (https://www.youtube.com/shorts/9LX7goTfmgs) is about the river views, a beautiful iris, and a cute cat.

Hope you like them as well.

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Craynier

April 21, 2025

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* I think " Two Videos I Took Yesterday" is also correct order like "I Took Two Videos Yesterday". Freely express yourself!

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Tammy

April 21, 2025

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Thank you so much!

Have a nice day!

Two Videos I Took Yesterday

word order: I took two videos yesterday

It's a busy day today, so I'm writing this entry in rush.

I just want to show you two videos that I took yesterday when I was jogging along the river near my apartment.

The first one is about two brunches of lovely roses (https://www.youtube.com/shorts/L7xgnDnB1-w).

bunches

They were blossoming so lively.

The second one (https://www.youtube.com/shorts/9LX7goTfmgs) is about the river views, a beautiful iris, and a cute cat.

Hope you like them as well.

hope u like that as well would be more casual

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Really Good!

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Tammy

April 21, 2025

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Thank you so much!

Have a nice day!

They were blossoming soand looked lively.

The second one (https://www.youtube.com/shorts/9LX7goTfmgs) is aboutof the view of the river views, a beautiful iris, and a cute cat.

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The area around your apartment looks beautiful!

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Tammy

April 21, 2025

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Thank you so much!

Yesterday was a sunny and warm day, which made the sky clear and gentle.

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It's a busy day today, so I'm writing this entry in rush.


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I just want to show you two videos that I took yesterday when I was jogging along the river near my apartment.


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The first one is about two brunches of lovely roses (https://www.youtube.com/shorts/L7xgnDnB1-w).


The first one is about two brunches of lovely roses (https://www.youtube.com/shorts/L7xgnDnB1-w).

bunches

The first one is about two bruanches of lovely roses (https://www.youtube.com/shorts/L7xgnDnB1-w).

* I figured you were trying to say "branches" [ the stem of the roses ] instead of brunches. * or maybe you were trying to say "bunch" [ meaning a "couple of lovely roses" ] * I saw the video, you can also say "The first one is about a bunch of two lovely roses". * If I were to describe it, I would say "the first video is about a couple of lovely roses".

The first one is about two brunches of lovely roses (https://www.youtube.com/shorts/L7xgnDnB1-w).

'brunch' is a portmanteau of 'breakfast' and 'lunch' for a mean that is a late breakfast/early lunch. The word you need is 'bunch'.

They were blossoming so lively.


They were blossoming soand looked lively.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

They were blossoming so lively.had such lovely blossoms.

The second one (https://www.youtube.com/shorts/9LX7goTfmgs) is about the river views, a beautiful iris, and a cute cat.


The second one (https://www.youtube.com/shorts/9LX7goTfmgs) is aboutof the view of the river views, a beautiful iris, and a cute cat.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Hope you like them as well.


Hope you like them as well.

hope u like that as well would be more casual

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HI hope you like them as well.

It is more correct to put 'I' at the start but you could casually say it as you have written it.

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